for Windigo6/9/2006 c1 Last time I go camping
I have read some of your other things, and with passing interest. The poetry is good, and allows a smoother flow of words in your writing. But this dark side to you is incredible(Ultrasonic is an excellent example). I suggest (If you don't mind me suggesting) that you stop writing on Fiction Press, and you find a publisher. These thoughts you have no right even thinking? Think them, and think them alot. I believe that is the much more powerful voice of your imagination. Listen.
I have read some of your other things, and with passing interest. The poetry is good, and allows a smoother flow of words in your writing. But this dark side to you is incredible(Ultrasonic is an excellent example). I suggest (If you don't mind me suggesting) that you stop writing on Fiction Press, and you find a publisher. These thoughts you have no right even thinking? Think them, and think them alot. I believe that is the much more powerful voice of your imagination. Listen.
9/12/2005 c1 
241Werewolf Nighteyes
Nice imagery. Violence is good. Well in my book anyway. But hey, I liked this. Keep up the good work!
241Werewolf NighteyesNice imagery. Violence is good. Well in my book anyway. But hey, I liked this. Keep up the good work!
9/1/2004 c1 CandyCaneCarnage
Great story! I love the details you used, and the twist ending is amazing.
Great story! I love the details you used, and the twist ending is amazing.
1/24/2003 c1 12restless-wandering
I liked the ending. It felt complete. This was an exceptionally good story. I also liked how you showed the two points of view (The "witch" and the human family)
12restless-wanderingI liked the ending. It felt complete. This was an exceptionally good story. I also liked how you showed the two points of view (The "witch" and the human family)
1/3/2003 c1 Kyobe
As horror goes, this isn't bad. I don't like gore much, but this didn't bother me much at all. By the way, did you misspell "Wendigo", as in the wind spirit, or did you do that on purpose?
As horror goes, this isn't bad. I don't like gore much, but this didn't bother me much at all. By the way, did you misspell "Wendigo", as in the wind spirit, or did you do that on purpose?
12/26/2001 c1 2Finn Mac Cool
INCREDIBLE! I loved the twist ending, as well as the hopelessness of her situation. The detail is great, but I didn't find it too gory (I think you can describe whatever you want on paper without it being to gory for people to read). Write on!
2Finn Mac CoolINCREDIBLE! I loved the twist ending, as well as the hopelessness of her situation. The detail is great, but I didn't find it too gory (I think you can describe whatever you want on paper without it being to gory for people to read). Write on!
10/3/2001 c1 33Tiefling
That was great! Gory and disgusting, but great. I like the ending.
However, you really shouldn't post things more than once. It slows the site down for everyone.
33TieflingThat was great! Gory and disgusting, but great. I like the ending.
However, you really shouldn't post things more than once. It slows the site down for everyone.
5/21/2001 c1 CrimsonQuill
Megan, you write better than I do - and I'm 34! Have I mentioned how much I think you suck? (Kidding!) Another great story. And by the way, I'm coming to kill you...
Megan, you write better than I do - and I'm 34! Have I mentioned how much I think you suck? (Kidding!) Another great story. And by the way, I'm coming to kill you...
2/18/2001 c1 15goodbye blue monday
That was so great! My God. The similies at the start were a bit close together, but thats just nit picking. It was kinda gory, but your not writing a story about fluffy bunnies playing in the sun, so it's justified.
15goodbye blue mondayThat was so great! My God. The similies at the start were a bit close together, but thats just nit picking. It was kinda gory, but your not writing a story about fluffy bunnies playing in the sun, so it's justified.
1/4/2001 c1 sera
I love your medaphors and discriptin yes its gory but its good
I love your medaphors and discriptin yes its gory but its good
12/20/2000 c1 Razorwire Tightrope
Not freakish enough to be spatterpunk - not developed enough to be anything else. Resign to the limbo of genreless fiction.
Not freakish enough to be spatterpunk - not developed enough to be anything else. Resign to the limbo of genreless fiction.
12/10/2000 c1 2HighWind71587
whoa, that was awesome, the only thing I'd suggest is, how did this happen? All the detail, man that was cool! I think there should be a sequel. This is too good to end like that. You have a lot of talent, and I'd love to see more of your work.
2HighWind71587whoa, that was awesome, the only thing I'd suggest is, how did this happen? All the detail, man that was cool! I think there should be a sequel. This is too good to end like that. You have a lot of talent, and I'd love to see more of your work.