for Pieces of Life12/25/2003 c1 AVIGON
I wasn't as caught by the last part as I was by the first six lines (which were anything a poem could want), but all in all, it's a nice rhythmic poem.
I wasn't as caught by the last part as I was by the first six lines (which were anything a poem could want), but all in all, it's a nice rhythmic poem.
11/8/2003 c1 
169Siberia82
Wow, what a profound and mystical piece. I'm mesmerized by your cryptic, yet gorgeous words. You capture the hopelessness of unrequited love so perfectly. I love it, you're a very talented writer.
169Siberia82Wow, what a profound and mystical piece. I'm mesmerized by your cryptic, yet gorgeous words. You capture the hopelessness of unrequited love so perfectly. I love it, you're a very talented writer.
7/27/2003 c1 8glitterjewele
*sigh* absolutely beautiful. this one is second only to Beautiful Antoinette. the rhythm and rhyme are perfect and the imagery is out of this world. one of the things that impressed me most was the emotion. sometimes people get so caught up in describing things with beautiful words that they forget about it, but you've woven it in here seamlessly, so it gets to you subconsciously, almost. i could feel it, but i was only half conscious of feeling it. a grand accomplishment indeed. but back to the phenomenal imagery ;). i could envision this with all my senses, it was such a cool experience. my absolute favorite lines (after much agonizing consideration) would have to be: "ashes ashes when i die," "starsweet flower won't you stay/beauty in the night of day" (the second of those completely absorbed me ~ so original), "patient love why rescue me," and "faithful sorrow from rejection." this poem honestly *sparkled* and i loved it. fantastic work! kudos!
8glitterjewele*sigh* absolutely beautiful. this one is second only to Beautiful Antoinette. the rhythm and rhyme are perfect and the imagery is out of this world. one of the things that impressed me most was the emotion. sometimes people get so caught up in describing things with beautiful words that they forget about it, but you've woven it in here seamlessly, so it gets to you subconsciously, almost. i could feel it, but i was only half conscious of feeling it. a grand accomplishment indeed. but back to the phenomenal imagery ;). i could envision this with all my senses, it was such a cool experience. my absolute favorite lines (after much agonizing consideration) would have to be: "ashes ashes when i die," "starsweet flower won't you stay/beauty in the night of day" (the second of those completely absorbed me ~ so original), "patient love why rescue me," and "faithful sorrow from rejection." this poem honestly *sparkled* and i loved it. fantastic work! kudos!
7/13/2003 c1 39Leche
Midnight flight in the wrong direction actually made me laugh. Pretty lively, i think.
39LecheMidnight flight in the wrong direction actually made me laugh. Pretty lively, i think.
6/27/2003 c1 Angele Raye
This poem has truly personal meaning for me. It voices feelings that I've been dealing with lately. It really means a lot that you wrote such a lovely piece. It feels like you wrote it for me.
~Angele Raye~
This poem has truly personal meaning for me. It voices feelings that I've been dealing with lately. It really means a lot that you wrote such a lovely piece. It feels like you wrote it for me.
~Angele Raye~
6/25/2003 c1 141Suicidal Butterfly
It's been a while since I've read rhyming poetry, nice one. So your pagan. cool. I used to be Wiccan , It's something I have horrid Nostalgia for. So do you have a preffered diety? Mine were the Hindu Goddess Kali and her concort, It's been a while I'm thinking the name is Shiva.? Oh well yeah. BUBYE. Tori AMos II.
141Suicidal ButterflyIt's been a while since I've read rhyming poetry, nice one. So your pagan. cool. I used to be Wiccan , It's something I have horrid Nostalgia for. So do you have a preffered diety? Mine were the Hindu Goddess Kali and her concort, It's been a while I'm thinking the name is Shiva.? Oh well yeah. BUBYE. Tori AMos II.
6/23/2003 c1 Kyalia
Love it. Good thing I'm a speedreader- you're uploading a lot. I also like "Unique", but my compy isn't letting me review.
Love it. Good thing I'm a speedreader- you're uploading a lot. I also like "Unique", but my compy isn't letting me review.