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4/25/2004 c1 22Qualin
This poem was cute. I enjoyed how you described the fight to just say "hi". It expressed more than just the feelings of accomplishment about having "done it", but how it was so hard, and thus, the emotions about this boy. It reminded me of junior high when girls and boys really start noticing each other.
6/24/2003 c1 26BaBeBgrL
aww...how cute. this is wonderful; short, sweet, simple, just the way a poem should be. I can also relate all too well, I've been in that situation more than once. keep up the wonderful work. ~Rachael~
6/23/2003 c1 KristyGrace19
Yay! Always go for it - My motto - you may regret what you do, but you'll regret what you don't do so much more!

And YOU DID IT! :)

Keep writing!

-Kris
6/23/2003 c1 anon63
nice job- i have definitely been in that situation b4!
6/23/2003 c1 PurpleWithPower
Great poem! 9/10! I was actually in the same situation! Good job!

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