for In Given Time9/26/2012 c20 Afan
Loved the way it ended, loved the characters, and everything about this sweet story, can't wait to read more of your stories.
Loved the way it ended, loved the characters, and everything about this sweet story, can't wait to read more of your stories.
2/17/2012 c17 
8StaySassy83
I'm glad they came out to their friends, I just hope it goes as well when they tell Ben's dad and stepmom
8StaySassy83I'm glad they came out to their friends, I just hope it goes as well when they tell Ben's dad and stepmom
2/15/2012 c14 StaySassy83
Yay, Draven knows! I feel bad for them, though, that was a tough way to find out about everything. Awesome chapter :) by far my favorite
Yay, Draven knows! I feel bad for them, though, that was a tough way to find out about everything. Awesome chapter :) by far my favorite
2/14/2012 c12 StaySassy83
I like seeing Draven taking care of Ben, even though Ben hasn't expressed his feelings for Draven just yet
I like seeing Draven taking care of Ben, even though Ben hasn't expressed his feelings for Draven just yet
6/14/2011 c20 Fumiki
Oh my god, this is so audibly cute! Your idea was so original, and it was very good!
I love how the story flows. It kinda sad and annoy me at some point (specially when Ben is soooo self-conscious and won't confessed his feelings to D) but chapter 19 made my day! lol
Oh my god, this is so audibly cute! Your idea was so original, and it was very good!
I love how the story flows. It kinda sad and annoy me at some point (specially when Ben is soooo self-conscious and won't confessed his feelings to D) but chapter 19 made my day! lol
3/28/2010 c20 Dark Lynnette
Such a sweet story. It moved kinda quickly, mostly the part where Draven finds the journal, but that's all good, it was bound to happen. I liked the characters and their friends. Maybe everyone in IRL wouldn't be so cool with them, but it was mostly believable because they were all outcasts or non-mainstream (artists) in one way or another. I'm glad you're still writing and staying creative. Good luck on all future projects.
Such a sweet story. It moved kinda quickly, mostly the part where Draven finds the journal, but that's all good, it was bound to happen. I liked the characters and their friends. Maybe everyone in IRL wouldn't be so cool with them, but it was mostly believable because they were all outcasts or non-mainstream (artists) in one way or another. I'm glad you're still writing and staying creative. Good luck on all future projects.
3/28/2010 c3 Dark Lynnette
Poor Ben. So, I'm into the story. Interesting so far. I do have a question that's not really important in the grand scheme, but it left me confused. What is Ben's full name. In chapter 2 I thought it was Benvolio Michael Henderson, which stood out to me 'cause I never would have guessed the first name. But in this chapter a Ben Farrell is mentioned. Two different people, or was there a name change. I totally missed that.
Poor Ben. So, I'm into the story. Interesting so far. I do have a question that's not really important in the grand scheme, but it left me confused. What is Ben's full name. In chapter 2 I thought it was Benvolio Michael Henderson, which stood out to me 'cause I never would have guessed the first name. But in this chapter a Ben Farrell is mentioned. Two different people, or was there a name change. I totally missed that.
11/22/2009 c20 4Ibbit
Great story. The guys arent pansy-ish. haha. I love it. Favorited. :D
Luck with writing.
~Ibbit
4IbbitGreat story. The guys arent pansy-ish. haha. I love it. Favorited. :D
Luck with writing.
~Ibbit
9/2/2009 c20 8dizzymslizzy
great ending! so cute... i love them both! great couple... wish there was more to the love scene but i think the way u wrote it was just perfect for this story
8dizzymslizzygreat ending! so cute... i love them both! great couple... wish there was more to the love scene but i think the way u wrote it was just perfect for this story