for On the Devil's Black Wing2/5/2005 c19 EpicPenguinness
An interesting story with original characters. I like that. I can't wait for the next chapter.
An interesting story with original characters. I like that. I can't wait for the next chapter.
9/4/2004 c19 
17Lady of romance world88
Orthius and Josephine was in love, right? Poor Sebastian. He had lost her and too late for him to save her before the happening. Is Orthius a evil? Why does she died? Does his power is so strong for her? Hurry update soon.
17Lady of romance world88Orthius and Josephine was in love, right? Poor Sebastian. He had lost her and too late for him to save her before the happening. Is Orthius a evil? Why does she died? Does his power is so strong for her? Hurry update soon.
4/19/2004 c19 Guest
wtf
wtf
3/19/2004 c19 griffin924
uh oh ...wats gonna happen next! i cant wait 4 da next chapter
update soon
uh oh ...wats gonna happen next! i cant wait 4 da next chapter
update soon
3/16/2004 c19 LittleHobbitGirl
aw *cries* its been to long. Great chapter! I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE 26TH! yay! hehe. ttyl. lylas. Update asap.
aw *cries* its been to long. Great chapter! I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE 26TH! yay! hehe. ttyl. lylas. Update asap.
1/31/2004 c18 not a very happy person
great story...update soon...
great story...update soon...
1/18/2004 c18 Savvy
I like it. It's got definate potential and the way you've been ending it the perfict way the trap your readers and ensure that they come back for more. Your writeing style is very good and captureing and the only advice i can think of to give you is to add a bit more to the description, but that's basicly it. Keep writeing, i wanna see what twisted thing you have in mind for our favorite goth and this new dude.
I like it. It's got definate potential and the way you've been ending it the perfict way the trap your readers and ensure that they come back for more. Your writeing style is very good and captureing and the only advice i can think of to give you is to add a bit more to the description, but that's basicly it. Keep writeing, i wanna see what twisted thing you have in mind for our favorite goth and this new dude.
1/17/2004 c18 8i.forgive.you
That is SO not cool, what is wrong with Joey! She's supposed to be with Sebastian. :(
8i.forgive.youThat is SO not cool, what is wrong with Joey! She's supposed to be with Sebastian. :(
1/15/2004 c18 17Lady of romance world88
I'm so happy that you update it.
I'm gladly Lady Josephine was ran away from Sebastian and Richard. Is the guy was king? I hope Josephine choose to become a Mistress of the Dark. Hurry update soon
17Lady of romance world88I'm so happy that you update it.
I'm gladly Lady Josephine was ran away from Sebastian and Richard. Is the guy was king? I hope Josephine choose to become a Mistress of the Dark. Hurry update soon
1/14/2004 c18 1Princess Rayna
What a TWIST! i love it! YOur creative writing is wonderful and your charactors are not typical! wonderful writing!
1Princess RaynaWhat a TWIST! i love it! YOur creative writing is wonderful and your charactors are not typical! wonderful writing!
1/10/2004 c17 8i.forgive.you
That I was so not expecting. How could Sebastian believe she could do such a thing. Continue soon...PLEASE!
8i.forgive.youThat I was so not expecting. How could Sebastian believe she could do such a thing. Continue soon...PLEASE!