for Promises5/29/2015 c39 25435345gb
So well done - I love how Sari was finally honest, what a beautiful restoration for these two.
So well done - I love how Sari was finally honest, what a beautiful restoration for these two.
5/29/2015 c28 25435345gb
Good for Gavin! (even though by accepting her proposal in the first place, he's partly responsible for the mess) I'm glad he finally spelled it out straight for her. Hopefully Sari wakes up and smells the coffee.
Good for Gavin! (even though by accepting her proposal in the first place, he's partly responsible for the mess) I'm glad he finally spelled it out straight for her. Hopefully Sari wakes up and smells the coffee.
5/29/2015 c23 25435345gb
Sari is such a selfish dumbass. She's willing to bring a child into the world with this man, but she won't have sex with him. Wasting thousands of dollars on an expensive treatment. Lying to physicians about things that could potentially affect her health. At least she seems somewhat self-aware of her selfishness, but too stubborn to give in I guess.
Sari is such a selfish dumbass. She's willing to bring a child into the world with this man, but she won't have sex with him. Wasting thousands of dollars on an expensive treatment. Lying to physicians about things that could potentially affect her health. At least she seems somewhat self-aware of her selfishness, but too stubborn to give in I guess.
5/29/2015 c20 25435345gb
Sari's selfishness has no end! I have no idea how Gavin is just able to lay down next to her like it's nothing.
Sari's selfishness has no end! I have no idea how Gavin is just able to lay down next to her like it's nothing.
5/29/2015 c12 25435345gb
Wow, the selfishness of this woman, willing to bring a child into the world, knowingly depriving it of two parents who are in a stable marriage. And making all these demands of Gavin - girl, you should be licking his boots, he didn't have to do anything for you.
Wow, the selfishness of this woman, willing to bring a child into the world, knowingly depriving it of two parents who are in a stable marriage. And making all these demands of Gavin - girl, you should be licking his boots, he didn't have to do anything for you.
7/4/2012 c41 sneaky-fox
I can't believe this hasn't got 5000 reviews. It is an amazing story and so filled with emotions that you had me laughing and crying throughout.
I have to admit that I often wanted to slap Sari for being cruel to Gavin (even though it wasn't her intention) he is such a lovable character and deserves all the happiness he can get :)... now I really want a "Gavin" for myself.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story, it will definitely not be the last time I read it!
I can't believe this hasn't got 5000 reviews. It is an amazing story and so filled with emotions that you had me laughing and crying throughout.
I have to admit that I often wanted to slap Sari for being cruel to Gavin (even though it wasn't her intention) he is such a lovable character and deserves all the happiness he can get :)... now I really want a "Gavin" for myself.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story, it will definitely not be the last time I read it!
7/4/2011 c41 
16non.graceful
The ending wasn't as sad or heartbreaking like it should have been but it'll suffice.
Gavin and Sari's relationship didn't seem as strong towards the ending like it had on the beginning.
I loved this story.
A few typos head and there.
16non.gracefulThe ending wasn't as sad or heartbreaking like it should have been but it'll suffice.
Gavin and Sari's relationship didn't seem as strong towards the ending like it had on the beginning.
I loved this story.
A few typos head and there.
5/19/2011 c41 1DeadlyGlamourous
i loveeeeee this story ;D omg haha i've planed on writing something similar to this but not like your idea. but ughh haha i love it :D let me know if you've gotten anything published :D
1DeadlyGlamourousi loveeeeee this story ;D omg haha i've planed on writing something similar to this but not like your idea. but ughh haha i love it :D let me know if you've gotten anything published :D
9/3/2010 c41 2AuraVybrid
Sniff, sniff, sniffle. this story was so beautiful, romantic, sad this was a roller-coaster of brilliance and significance. thank you for sharing.-Aura
2AuraVybridSniff, sniff, sniffle. this story was so beautiful, romantic, sad this was a roller-coaster of brilliance and significance. thank you for sharing.-Aura
6/1/2009 c41 MareRox
that was AMAZING!
i laughed and cried and was frusturated
ur an amazing author
that was AMAZING!
i laughed and cried and was frusturated
ur an amazing author