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5/17/2004 c1 3Deboxah
Wow...I love this poem it's great. I needed to learn that since I waste much of my time.. :D
3/7/2004 c1 26Endless Nightmares
Yes Time does go by,
Nicely done!
Whispers In Silence
9/14/2003 c1 22JTierra1988
I LOVE this poem it's such a true thing we can't let time pass us by but yet we still do ^_^ JMBunny
7/12/2003 c1 32aulliana
This is so sad! I loved it anyway though. It's kind of how I've been feeling since all my senior-friends graduated in May and I'm realizing that we're all getting older and nothing is ever gonna move any slower... great work. ~Sm!lEz~~
7/8/2003 c1 42Alicia Wood
Hey. I really liked this poem, nice theme and message. Good job.

~The Woodster
6/26/2003 c1 Lazerponies
wow, so powerful and concise. excellent! yay, keep writting. i especially like the lines:

"Yet life continues on as planned

And waves still beat upon the sand

Man, oblivious, wavers time

And lets this precious thing slip by"

really powerful. great work.
6/25/2003 c1 endless040
"to live is to die" Awesome poem. Time is a hard thing to write about. well you did a pretty good job. nice.

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