for always4/27/2004 c1 
3ses
i really like this poem, i liked the repetition you used. its really good. post more.
steph.
3sesi really like this poem, i liked the repetition you used. its really good. post more.
steph.
12/14/2003 c1 Chrissy
wow kid, i knew u wer good but that was grate. keep it up.
ur old school mate johnson :-p
wow kid, i knew u wer good but that was grate. keep it up.
ur old school mate johnson :-p
8/30/2003 c1 11T III
your style is incredible i really love it and this poem shows it best i think although for some reason i see this more as the love of a family member than an actual lover (not sure why maybe im projecting my own problems lol) well either way i like this and wish u had let me read this stuff before and if u ever try to tell me your stuff is crap again im going to get upset cause this is better than mine :P
taffy
11T IIIyour style is incredible i really love it and this poem shows it best i think although for some reason i see this more as the love of a family member than an actual lover (not sure why maybe im projecting my own problems lol) well either way i like this and wish u had let me read this stuff before and if u ever try to tell me your stuff is crap again im going to get upset cause this is better than mine :P
taffy
7/15/2003 c1 Charvanatori'll be back like ya daft cunt LOL
ignore the name...im hyper right now lol...this one...very suicidal...sounds like a suicide note...or someones dying thoughts at least...meh...mebbes just me
::charvanator::
ignore the name...im hyper right now lol...this one...very suicidal...sounds like a suicide note...or someones dying thoughts at least...meh...mebbes just me
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