for Bird of Power3/23/2007 c16 
136LilLaTLuv
Hey!
That's okay. I understand the whole situation. Thanks for replying to my review. And, well, I love the story, so I'm willing to wait a little longer. Oh, if you don't hear from me soon, that means I'm still grounded. I had to sneak on here right now to give you this review. Sh...don't tell anyone! ;)
Luv ya,
Tashi :)
P.S. UPDATE SOON! PLEASE? I can't wait to read more!
136LilLaTLuvHey!
That's okay. I understand the whole situation. Thanks for replying to my review. And, well, I love the story, so I'm willing to wait a little longer. Oh, if you don't hear from me soon, that means I'm still grounded. I had to sneak on here right now to give you this review. Sh...don't tell anyone! ;)
Luv ya,
Tashi :)
P.S. UPDATE SOON! PLEASE? I can't wait to read more!
10/27/2006 c16 10Blade Griffin
Glad to hear you haven't keeled over. I understand the hell in a hay basket busy, been there myself. Hope things eventually cool down for ya.
Good Luck,
Griff
10Blade GriffinGlad to hear you haven't keeled over. I understand the hell in a hay basket busy, been there myself. Hope things eventually cool down for ya.
Good Luck,
Griff
8/25/2006 c16 bgfbzsethteretr
Kay, number one: I like this story, and you have no idea how often I read a story and I fall in love with it, and then the last chapter is a cheap ending: the author is telling me that they're too [insert excuse here] to continue.Number two: The author's note has been there for four months. I don't think that it has to be taken down quickly. Number three: You aren't updating, taking the last chapter off, or doing anything really, so why am I bothering to awaken a dormant author who clearly couldn't care less about his/her readers? I have no idea, maybe it's because I enjoy your story. Who knows?
Kay, number one: I like this story, and you have no idea how often I read a story and I fall in love with it, and then the last chapter is a cheap ending: the author is telling me that they're too [insert excuse here] to continue.Number two: The author's note has been there for four months. I don't think that it has to be taken down quickly. Number three: You aren't updating, taking the last chapter off, or doing anything really, so why am I bothering to awaken a dormant author who clearly couldn't care less about his/her readers? I have no idea, maybe it's because I enjoy your story. Who knows?
8/18/2006 c13 djinn-in-a-bottle
Good story. How old is Shanya? It's a little messed up if she is 11 or 12 and she is romantically involved (in any way) with Aaron, who I picture to be 19 or 20. Anyways...Thanks!
Good story. How old is Shanya? It's a little messed up if she is 11 or 12 and she is romantically involved (in any way) with Aaron, who I picture to be 19 or 20. Anyways...Thanks!
11/16/2005 c15 2abc123 chewy
i really like this story, i think you should continue... i wanna know what happens...
2abc123 chewyi really like this story, i think you should continue... i wanna know what happens...
10/9/2005 c1 136LilLaTLuv
Hey!
WHERE ARE YOU? COME BACK! PLEASE? WE MISS YOU AND LOVE THIS STORY AND WE REALLY, REALLY, REALLY WISH YOU'D CONTINUE IT! PRETTY PLEASE?
Luv ya,Tashi :)
136LilLaTLuvHey!
WHERE ARE YOU? COME BACK! PLEASE? WE MISS YOU AND LOVE THIS STORY AND WE REALLY, REALLY, REALLY WISH YOU'D CONTINUE IT! PRETTY PLEASE?
Luv ya,Tashi :)
8/2/2005 c15 LilLaTLuv
Hey!
What's with Tessa? And why did she lose control? Was it because she concentrated solely on anger? Is Tessa a member of the Dragonfire gang? Or what? Was that a glimpse of the future? I hope not! I'd rather there be a happy ending if you don't mind! UPDATE SOON! Please?
Luv ya,Tashi :)
Hey!
What's with Tessa? And why did she lose control? Was it because she concentrated solely on anger? Is Tessa a member of the Dragonfire gang? Or what? Was that a glimpse of the future? I hope not! I'd rather there be a happy ending if you don't mind! UPDATE SOON! Please?
Luv ya,Tashi :)
5/13/2005 c15 Enry 'Iggins
this is a great story. it would be a shame if you won't be able to update it soon.
'Enry 'Iggins
this is a great story. it would be a shame if you won't be able to update it soon.
'Enry 'Iggins
4/21/2005 c15 4Underestimated
You had better update soon. I'm very curious as to where this might be going. I know you haven't updated in a while, but don't hesitate to! I loved the story!
4UnderestimatedYou had better update soon. I'm very curious as to where this might be going. I know you haven't updated in a while, but don't hesitate to! I loved the story!
4/12/2005 c15 topsecret32
u cnt posibly b done...update.
u cnt posibly b done...update.
2/24/2005 c15 7gingerbeer
OMG so fluid... *drools* You're amazing! I couldn't put it down-ok I couldn't close the window... Thanks I learned a lot about character distinction and detail in general... I especially feel sorry for Bea because she's always keeping the peace, and Tessa was easily a snob by the way she acted and talked. Amazing! Keep up the good work; update soon pleez!
7gingerbeerOMG so fluid... *drools* You're amazing! I couldn't put it down-ok I couldn't close the window... Thanks I learned a lot about character distinction and detail in general... I especially feel sorry for Bea because she's always keeping the peace, and Tessa was easily a snob by the way she acted and talked. Amazing! Keep up the good work; update soon pleez!
2/23/2005 c3 gingerbeer
Wow this flows so well! I was especially awed by the way you introduced Bea... Really fluid. Grabbing one of the questions floating around her head was really visual, loved that. Your dialogue and humor are amazing; it's like a better version of X-Men, more realistic... Loved that first bit of mind shouting and demonstration of telepathic monitoring of Bea and Shanya... The light in the back of the head thing took a while to understand, but you explain with events and actions so well! And the frustration that makes her feel like a caged animal happens to me to, but I've never been able to describe it in words like you did.
The intro paragraph was slightly chunky in chapter 4 "Morning Encounters," but hey this is coming from an amateur.
I'm in the middle of Ch 4 right now and I'm still kinda confused about her age. In the beginning I thought she was an innocent little elementary schooler. Now she's talking like an angry adult: "listen mister!" Hehe... Or is this her character development?
"without being able to see its source" might sound better as "without seeing where it comes from"
Wow this flows so well! I was especially awed by the way you introduced Bea... Really fluid. Grabbing one of the questions floating around her head was really visual, loved that. Your dialogue and humor are amazing; it's like a better version of X-Men, more realistic... Loved that first bit of mind shouting and demonstration of telepathic monitoring of Bea and Shanya... The light in the back of the head thing took a while to understand, but you explain with events and actions so well! And the frustration that makes her feel like a caged animal happens to me to, but I've never been able to describe it in words like you did.
The intro paragraph was slightly chunky in chapter 4 "Morning Encounters," but hey this is coming from an amateur.
I'm in the middle of Ch 4 right now and I'm still kinda confused about her age. In the beginning I thought she was an innocent little elementary schooler. Now she's talking like an angry adult: "listen mister!" Hehe... Or is this her character development?
"without being able to see its source" might sound better as "without seeing where it comes from"
12/9/2004 c15 KaylaisEvenstar
^_^ Another great chapter. I read it a bit back when you first posted it but I just reread it again... so i'm not sure if I already commented yet. ^_^
I just got your review for my story, 'Lost in Conflict' I'm not sure how old it is... I haven't been on the internet for a few months, as I had a slight(by slight I mean huge) mishap during a road trip that had me stuck in another state without internet access for quite awhile.
Anyway, I appreciate the review ^_^ I hardly ever get reviews, so its a bit of an honor for me... lolI'm glad to hear you liked my story, but I regret to inform i'm pulling all current chapters of it and I won't be writing anymore on this site, or at least not for awhile.
Surprisingly enough it seems I've improved enough at my writing over the past few months to warrant the interest of a publicist. So, i'm taking everything I have down just in case I want to use it at all.
I really appreciated your review and your interest in my story, it was great having an author I read comment like that ^_^Take Care,Jadelyn
^_^ Another great chapter. I read it a bit back when you first posted it but I just reread it again... so i'm not sure if I already commented yet. ^_^
I just got your review for my story, 'Lost in Conflict' I'm not sure how old it is... I haven't been on the internet for a few months, as I had a slight(by slight I mean huge) mishap during a road trip that had me stuck in another state without internet access for quite awhile.
Anyway, I appreciate the review ^_^ I hardly ever get reviews, so its a bit of an honor for me... lolI'm glad to hear you liked my story, but I regret to inform i'm pulling all current chapters of it and I won't be writing anymore on this site, or at least not for awhile.
Surprisingly enough it seems I've improved enough at my writing over the past few months to warrant the interest of a publicist. So, i'm taking everything I have down just in case I want to use it at all.
I really appreciated your review and your interest in my story, it was great having an author I read comment like that ^_^Take Care,Jadelyn