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10/20/2003 c1 orangefreak33
Weird. Have you ever read the parody of The Raven with the computer (I don't remember what it's called). The last part reminds me of that. It's got a creepy vibe all the way through.
7/6/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
This was very interesting. And very original and meaningful. I liked the ending especially. Good work, keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*
6/30/2003 c1 9Magentian
LOL very nice! I liked the ending. The first part had me confused, though... although I felt that something really deep was flying right over my head, I couldn't understand, no matter how hard I tried... oh well. Maybe someone can... although now, when I look back at it, it all makes sense... well, in any event, nice work. You managed (as is your wont) to write something both well-phrased, beautifully symbolic, and incredibly deep. I already said this, I know, but I love the way you think. ^_^ Please keep writing!
6/27/2003 c1 9ChibiYume
Kept me holding my breath, it's very suspenseful! I like the ending ^-^
6/26/2003 c1 4ColorCrayons
i ADORE the end! perfectly ended. the poem had a good rhythm and a good flow to it. its words are "deeper" than mine normally are, but mine are normally fluffy and light :) i liked

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