Just In
for SeLf FiSh

10/18/2003 c1 Carolyn
love it..GREAT job...as usual...but mine is still better cuz.it had more whys...eh heh...well anyways...GREAT JOB...and HE still owes ME a favor.
7/30/2003 c1 Daisy Decamps
Oh, you're TOTALLY right, and I TOTALLY agree w/ u. This poem is filled w/ emotion, and it's also filled w/ the truth. I love it. Oh, and your profile is funny, u know, the one w/ the director. Have u ever considered being a comedian?
7/29/2003 c1 HomeFry
...wow. this was beautiful and had so much feeling behind it. you put lots of work into this poem and it shows. wonderful!

one thing i noticed that u might want to look into, however is it says "Some people tends hides in their shell" do u mean people tend to hide?

great poem overall with a powerful message. good job!
7/3/2003 c1 Flamewing who is too tired to log in
*much applause* Excellent ranty poem - lots of emotion, anger, frustration, all that good stuff. Loads of character. I realy liked this.

~Flamewing who thanks you for r/r her poem
6/28/2003 c1 112Jace1
amazing how only a couple re-occuring questions could arise such a thought. i guess im selfish, but then again, everyone is selfish.. like u said. great poem, and u've made one of the best points about the world i've heard in a long time, too bad u cant get the whole world to read this...because then maybe they'd think about things more.

6/27/2003 c1 jennifer p
hey , gj . i love the poem , especially the line, "maybe the meaning of life is to help each other , to try to open our eyes wide open, and look around and realize the big mess that we've made and actually try to change this turbulent world that we created back into the pradise that the world once was"

thx for sharing your idea. this changed my life
6/27/2003 c1 joie 610
nice work, silver! lots of feeling and angst... ahh, what a sad poem... cuz a lot of it is true :\ good advice, too. just giving you some cc: it's spelled 'dying' and you made a few subject-very agreement mistakes and other things. but that's not what matters! so good job!

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