for Disheveled Nymphet11/28/2003 c1 Evangeline
I adore this poem, with its perverse spring imagery! I especially love the juxtaposition of the blackberry stained fingers and bloody fingertips. Excellent work!
I adore this poem, with its perverse spring imagery! I especially love the juxtaposition of the blackberry stained fingers and bloody fingertips. Excellent work!
6/26/2003 c1 
19la nuit mes yeux t'eclairent
Oh, lovely! I like the imagery and word choice used. The only tip I have is the last word should be blossoms instead of blooms. I think it should be. But it was a great poem.
Ozone.
19la nuit mes yeux t'eclairentOh, lovely! I like the imagery and word choice used. The only tip I have is the last word should be blossoms instead of blooms. I think it should be. But it was a great poem.
Ozone.