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3/28/2004 c1 27a-Leng
Hrm...it's a nice poem with a good poetic flow but what is it supposed to mean I wonder? s'all good though.
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7/13/2003 c1 12304LuLu12305
ohh~ such a lovely poem! My favourite part is:

I know you’re there

The feeling seems so clear

But how can I know

If you never show

I cannot see, and I cannot touch

What I have isn’t so much

I love you, and that is all

Give it a try, and let me fall…

She should b a poemtess! Mind I ask..what happened between u n tt?
7/1/2003 c1 20forever-blues
nice peom, had some changes, but still great...
6/26/2003 c1 2BlueFire42
it's good- is this what you are really feeling towards this person though? I like the context of words you have used but maybe include more of a description

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