for Mirage7/4/2003 c1 lainxauber
This sort of poem makes more sense to me than the kind that seem to make sense, if that even...makes sense. Oh god, what has happened to my brain tonight?
This sort of poem makes more sense to me than the kind that seem to make sense, if that even...makes sense. Oh god, what has happened to my brain tonight?
7/4/2003 c1 
126swift sky silver
it makes sense to me, kinda hard to explain though. this description does lead to a mirage, good job=0)
126swift sky silverit makes sense to me, kinda hard to explain though. this description does lead to a mirage, good job=0)
7/4/2003 c1 38Shadafakup
Poetry, doesnt have to make sense to everyone in my opinion.. It is what you feel.. Anyway, it actually does make sense to me- in a weird sort of way that I'm not sure how to explain.. Refreshing short little piece.. Good job..
38ShadafakupPoetry, doesnt have to make sense to everyone in my opinion.. It is what you feel.. Anyway, it actually does make sense to me- in a weird sort of way that I'm not sure how to explain.. Refreshing short little piece.. Good job..
7/3/2003 c1 greenfroggies
I think i understand this, but i wont try and put it into other words. A beautiful, beautiful poem
I think i understand this, but i wont try and put it into other words. A beautiful, beautiful poem
6/30/2003 c1 8alix camille
It makes sense in my little twisted world. Of course, I can MAKE things make sense. Like with one of my poems "rotten crips" Lol. But anyway, this was really good, I have to agree with the others, calming and peaceful. Pretty...I pictured something mystical as I read this...
8alix camilleIt makes sense in my little twisted world. Of course, I can MAKE things make sense. Like with one of my poems "rotten crips" Lol. But anyway, this was really good, I have to agree with the others, calming and peaceful. Pretty...I pictured something mystical as I read this...
6/29/2003 c1 Lostithiliel
Hmm... interesting use of words. 'Dandle'.
Like William Shakespeare, when lacking a sufficient word, just make one up!
Hmm... interesting use of words. 'Dandle'.
Like William Shakespeare, when lacking a sufficient word, just make one up!
6/27/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
I like it. It seems like a state of mind that you reach when your head is clear. This was relaxing to read.
~Heart of the Sword
100Keep it 100I like it. It seems like a state of mind that you reach when your head is clear. This was relaxing to read.
~Heart of the Sword
6/27/2003 c1 89Stoffpferd
To me, in fact, it really makes sense! I really like this one...
"dandle off from reality"...simply beautiful!
~Stoffpferd~
89StoffpferdTo me, in fact, it really makes sense! I really like this one...
"dandle off from reality"...simply beautiful!
~Stoffpferd~
6/27/2003 c1 51Lieschen
Very ethereal...and they don't always have to make sense...i like em that way ! ^_^
ELise
51LieschenVery ethereal...and they don't always have to make sense...i like em that way ! ^_^
ELise
6/27/2003 c1 34Children of the Root
I like it! I really like the last line. It makes the whole poem sound very cool.
34Children of the RootI like it! I really like the last line. It makes the whole poem sound very cool.