for The Secrets of Thornwood Hall5/2/2007 c1 
8Little Comet
This chapter is really good, but it seems like there should be another one to follow it. Will that happen some time in the future?
8Little CometThis chapter is really good, but it seems like there should be another one to follow it. Will that happen some time in the future?
7/14/2004 c1 2Cha Oseye Tempest Thrain
Nice... I hope you're planning to update soon. Normally I'm not a fan of the passive... but when you're trying to create a spooky atmosphere, it often works.
2Cha Oseye Tempest ThrainNice... I hope you're planning to update soon. Normally I'm not a fan of the passive... but when you're trying to create a spooky atmosphere, it often works.
12/14/2003 c1 lacy
eep! scary. more please!
eep! scary. more please!
7/13/2003 c1 7You Need More Flair
I wish this had a follow-up piece *hint*.
I like it. I felt like I was there with them as G.A. Katharine came to get em. Veddy good.
7You Need More FlairI wish this had a follow-up piece *hint*.
I like it. I felt like I was there with them as G.A. Katharine came to get em. Veddy good.
6/28/2003 c1 Fran Eckard
An entertaining first chapter :) This has all the ingredients for a good haunted house story. The location, the circumstances, the characters – its all spot on. You also put in a fair amount of detail about the house too. Perhaps in the second chapter we can see more of the parents as well as the sisters, and some good family interaction :)
An entertaining first chapter :) This has all the ingredients for a good haunted house story. The location, the circumstances, the characters – its all spot on. You also put in a fair amount of detail about the house too. Perhaps in the second chapter we can see more of the parents as well as the sisters, and some good family interaction :)