5/26/2004 c1 2GirlMaverick
This reveiw is actually a review on your bio but it won't let me do that so I'll pt it here instead. I HATE CHEESECAKE! EW! The fact that you like it is just further evidence of your insanity.
This reveiw is actually a review on your bio but it won't let me do that so I'll pt it here instead. I HATE CHEESECAKE! EW! The fact that you like it is just further evidence of your insanity.
12/5/2003 c2 blackblade2
(Couldn't submit a second review logged in.)
Anyway, hey Ravioli, it's Ace...I tried to e-mail you, but your address isn't working. Are you sure you put up the right one? My e-mail (which has changed) is now , so if you get an e-mail from there...that's me! I've gotta go now, I'll talk to you later...(update! *hint hint*)
(Couldn't submit a second review logged in.)
Anyway, hey Ravioli, it's Ace...I tried to e-mail you, but your address isn't working. Are you sure you put up the right one? My e-mail (which has changed) is now , so if you get an e-mail from there...that's me! I've gotta go now, I'll talk to you later...(update! *hint hint*)
7/29/2003 c2 1blackblade2
Uh oh...she is insane? Or is this just meant to confuse the dear reader, haha?
The whole thing with Kaori was very cute. Sorry if I misspelled that, I actually read this chappy last week and didn't get a chance to review until now...
I like the conversations between your voices. Very interesting...
Uh oh...she is insane? Or is this just meant to confuse the dear reader, haha?
The whole thing with Kaori was very cute. Sorry if I misspelled that, I actually read this chappy last week and didn't get a chance to review until now...
I like the conversations between your voices. Very interesting...
7/26/2003 c1 Amizannie
well UG i know ur a good writer or something but i havn't read it. sry Rocky i know u assume ppl read ur story before reviewing it but its probably good since i rememeber that other book u have writtin. it was like C some (i think it was like Ca?) but it was good. so whatever. well im goin over S Doggs' bachelor pad to clean and stuff. so i'll talk to ya later Rocky. ADIOS!
(*i just relized this had nothing to do with ur story!)
-Amizannie
well UG i know ur a good writer or something but i havn't read it. sry Rocky i know u assume ppl read ur story before reviewing it but its probably good since i rememeber that other book u have writtin. it was like C some (i think it was like Ca?) but it was good. so whatever. well im goin over S Doggs' bachelor pad to clean and stuff. so i'll talk to ya later Rocky. ADIOS!
(*i just relized this had nothing to do with ur story!)
-Amizannie
7/21/2003 c1 blackblade2
Hi Ravioli! This story's cool so far. I can't wait to read more, so I'm not going to leave a long review. Just one thing: watch for run-on sentences. Other than that...I really like Yashi! I wanna know who he is...so I guess I shall read and find out...
Hi Ravioli! This story's cool so far. I can't wait to read more, so I'm not going to leave a long review. Just one thing: watch for run-on sentences. Other than that...I really like Yashi! I wanna know who he is...so I guess I shall read and find out...
7/5/2003 c2 27kastor
i said it was like x-men2 because of this secret "home" for mutants. and i was right with dilly.., and i really look forward to more of it. to the chapters: I would prefer shorter ones, coz that makes reading them easier and cheaper.
my confusion comes from not knowing so much english... so, til next time, i`ll read it.
i said it was like x-men2 because of this secret "home" for mutants. and i was right with dilly.., and i really look forward to more of it. to the chapters: I would prefer shorter ones, coz that makes reading them easier and cheaper.
my confusion comes from not knowing so much english... so, til next time, i`ll read it.
7/2/2003 c2 7AethraZip
MEEP! *restrains urge to glomp Unity Girl*
*Ahem* Anywho . . . nice! Most mutant stories are about people like the X-Men, it's nice to see one about *normal* (take that how you want) kids. BTW . . . cheesecake for update, yes?
MEEP! *restrains urge to glomp Unity Girl*
*Ahem* Anywho . . . nice! Most mutant stories are about people like the X-Men, it's nice to see one about *normal* (take that how you want) kids. BTW . . . cheesecake for update, yes?
7/2/2003 c2 2Eiji Tunsinagi
Well, things get more interesting as the plot thickens and new characters arrive... Update soon!
~Eiji Tunsinagi
Well, things get more interesting as the plot thickens and new characters arrive... Update soon!
~Eiji Tunsinagi
7/1/2003 c2 Ices1004
Pretty good story, little on the confusing side but who cares? Please update soon. This is pretty good. I like the 'Not The End' thing.
Pretty good story, little on the confusing side but who cares? Please update soon. This is pretty good. I like the 'Not The End' thing.
6/29/2003 c1 7AethraZip
Hmm . . . well, thats certainly different . . .
A fellow cheesecake fan? *glomp* I LUFF CHEESECAKE! CHEESECAKE DAISUKE DESU YO!
*ahem* Well, anyway, if you get a chance, please read my manga. It's not real great, but I want reviews . . . (AethraZip is a greedy bitch, that she is^^)
Hmm . . . well, thats certainly different . . .
A fellow cheesecake fan? *glomp* I LUFF CHEESECAKE! CHEESECAKE DAISUKE DESU YO!
*ahem* Well, anyway, if you get a chance, please read my manga. It's not real great, but I want reviews . . . (AethraZip is a greedy bitch, that she is^^)
6/28/2003 c1 2Eiji Tunsinagi
This story is very different from the others I've read (different in a GOOD way) and I'm waiting for you to update it. I find the characters and the situation they're in very interesting. But I do have a question: Why is Dillon so evil sounding? Does he have an evil plan or something? I'd like to know. Put up the rest!
And oh yeah: Review my stories too! That'd be great.
I'm expecting the next chapter of your story soon, so please dont leave me with the cliffhanger!
~Eiji Tunsinagi
This story is very different from the others I've read (different in a GOOD way) and I'm waiting for you to update it. I find the characters and the situation they're in very interesting. But I do have a question: Why is Dillon so evil sounding? Does he have an evil plan or something? I'd like to know. Put up the rest!
And oh yeah: Review my stories too! That'd be great.
I'm expecting the next chapter of your story soon, so please dont leave me with the cliffhanger!
~Eiji Tunsinagi
6/28/2003 c1 27kastor
fduck, the first story i read her, and it`S a damn cliffhanger...
so by now i think the person who grabs from behind is *dilly*(I`M an escaflowne fan and on ff net there is this special character, you might know it)
some things in the plot remind me of x -men 2 but hey, it doesn`? T matter, i`M confused and i want to read more...
fduck, the first story i read her, and it`S a damn cliffhanger...
so by now i think the person who grabs from behind is *dilly*(I`M an escaflowne fan and on ff net there is this special character, you might know it)
some things in the plot remind me of x -men 2 but hey, it doesn`? T matter, i`M confused and i want to read more...