7/22/2004 c1 jellyjulie
... that was amazing.

6/28/2003 c1 63Tormented Romantic
this is so beautiful in its own dark way. The flow is so well done and the rhymes don't sound forced, very nice choice in words.I was especially fond of the lines that read: "somehow I asked the dark to come/Somehow told it I'd succumb." for some reason those lines just really stood out to me.They sort of conveyed how out of your hands this change was. VERY nicely done.

-*- Tormented Romantic -*-

6/28/2003 c1 7Pa-Ja-Mas1
hey i know whats its like only the problem is... i let go, oh well that just make life more interesting. keep up the good (if you like to call depressionn good) work

Pa-Ja-Mas1