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9/21/2003 c1 8Jess Angel
Nice poem on the search for identity.

I liked the transitions and how you progressed from one stage of life to the next. It was a nice touch.

Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)
7/29/2003 c1 38ittybittytreefrog
Good poem. It's very sad, but I can relate to it. I think most people, at some time, don't really know who they are.
7/22/2003 c1 ER Queen of Insanity
So good! I don't know who I am either.
7/1/2003 c1 Traced In Green
Another excellent piece. And I can also relate to this one. You are a great writer, I love this!

luvs

Young'n'HopelessKid
6/28/2003 c1 91Sev-chan
Wow that was extreamlly good,

great work!

Sev-chan ^_^

the cat ::purrs::
6/28/2003 c1 63Tormented Romantic
I love this! The whole transition through each stage of your life was wonderful and I can definetely relate. I also liked how it starts out w/ more physical characteristics and gets all deep and emotional towards the end. It's wonderful that you can "expose" yourself to all the rest of us here on fp.net, it isn't hard to feel all the emotion that was put into this.

all that said, there is really one word that sums it all up: Beautiful. Keep up the wonderful work.

-Tormented Romantic-
6/28/2003 c1 31ArisaKatsu
I feel like that sometimes. A lot more lately. Not really sure where you are or where your headed, but you defenitely know where you've been. Great emtions.

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