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8/15/2003 c1 2Jennifer H. Westall
wow...very good. I like how you put your feelings out there...hope everything works out
7/30/2003 c1 Nerexia James
Hey, very good poem. Coming from someone who knows a heartbreak from experience. The one discrepancy (sp?) I found was "Because no one else could ever try To take away this love of mine" Good lines but the only couplet that didn't rhyme. It kind of made the flow, that was quite nice by the way, falter towards the end.
6/29/2003 c1 10depressedstar
Awwe! That was sweet! really good writing! keep it up!

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