
1/12/2005 c4
3Siren4Usweetie
O, I likey this story. You should update it ^_^ I am curious to see what happens.

O, I likey this story. You should update it ^_^ I am curious to see what happens.
9/22/2003 c4
2BlueFire42
wow! i liked this one! i luv the name Elita...do u like horses? coz u know abit about them by the way u describe their riding...don't worry i do! teehee
so yea- can't wait to see what happens. Feel free to email me at my adress or anything
If u're bored come read my story- The Vampires Conjurer or The Love Or One;
The Love Of one is new! Good job writing
i'll keep an eye on this one!

wow! i liked this one! i luv the name Elita...do u like horses? coz u know abit about them by the way u describe their riding...don't worry i do! teehee
so yea- can't wait to see what happens. Feel free to email me at my adress or anything
If u're bored come read my story- The Vampires Conjurer or The Love Or One;
The Love Of one is new! Good job writing
i'll keep an eye on this one!
9/8/2003 c3 Laura
Wai! Lily-chan! Awesome-ness! ^_^ As always! And look I finally got around to reading it!
Wai! Lily-chan! Awesome-ness! ^_^ As always! And look I finally got around to reading it!
8/25/2003 c3 lostinscotland
whoo! updation! i'm happy!
this sounds intriguing, when will she see him again? more importantly, when will you post again? can't wait to find out!
whoo! updation! i'm happy!
this sounds intriguing, when will she see him again? more importantly, when will you post again? can't wait to find out!
8/19/2003 c2
67secluded existence
wow. first i must thank you for reading almost ALL of my stories and poems. well thanks for all the nice comments and everything you left. secondly, i must congratulate you on your story. write more now! its very good! who is elita? where will she go? come on!

wow. first i must thank you for reading almost ALL of my stories and poems. well thanks for all the nice comments and everything you left. secondly, i must congratulate you on your story. write more now! its very good! who is elita? where will she go? come on!
6/29/2003 c2 lostinscotland
ooh, intriguing. you should continue this, just watch your proofreading a bit, k?
keep it up!
ooh, intriguing. you should continue this, just watch your proofreading a bit, k?
keep it up!