for Find Me8/3/2003 c1 
17HellsAngelJCV
. So many poems, so little compliments. I'm not used to reviewing, and I'm trying really hard to 1: keep my reviews original and 2: stay awak *drinks tea* cafeeine
17HellsAngelJCV. So many poems, so little compliments. I'm not used to reviewing, and I'm trying really hard to 1: keep my reviews original and 2: stay awak *drinks tea* cafeeine
7/6/2003 c1 38Shadafakup
Its a great piece of work.. The poem sounds entirely detached and searching so you definitely got your point through.. I liked these lines best :" just want to be a kid again
Be able to cry
And laugh again
Have all the simplicity of childhood,
Go back to the way it was,
All the things I thought I knew"
Because I tend to feel that way too.. Maybe I dont like kids because I'm just plain jealous..
Back to the point, this is a great piece.. It has a distinctive style and it is good, really good..
38ShadafakupIts a great piece of work.. The poem sounds entirely detached and searching so you definitely got your point through.. I liked these lines best :" just want to be a kid again
Be able to cry
And laugh again
Have all the simplicity of childhood,
Go back to the way it was,
All the things I thought I knew"
Because I tend to feel that way too.. Maybe I dont like kids because I'm just plain jealous..
Back to the point, this is a great piece.. It has a distinctive style and it is good, really good..
7/5/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
Great poem and I can relate to this. Every so often, when I'm feeling depressed, I look back on life and wonder where it went wrong, then wish I could go back to my childhood, where life was so much easier. Very good work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenGreat poem and I can relate to this. Every so often, when I'm feeling depressed, I look back on life and wonder where it went wrong, then wish I could go back to my childhood, where life was so much easier. Very good work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
6/30/2003 c1 157Just Another Face
I know this feeling -.-
Its not fun.
Nice poem though...I like the "Help me please, I'm lost, Find me" part..^.^
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157Just Another FaceI know this feeling -.-
Its not fun.
Nice poem though...I like the "Help me please, I'm lost, Find me" part..^.^
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6/29/2003 c1 3Angerona
:D
yay!
love it love it love it!
There are a few things i would change just to make the flow better (what can i say I'm into the flow) but other then that thumbs up! hehe
Again really great work!
~Angerona the Goddess of Death~
P.S What? No I didn;t eat it. Yes i'm sure...where did you find that rapper?
3Angerona:D
yay!
love it love it love it!
There are a few things i would change just to make the flow better (what can i say I'm into the flow) but other then that thumbs up! hehe
Again really great work!
~Angerona the Goddess of Death~
P.S What? No I didn;t eat it. Yes i'm sure...where did you find that rapper?
6/29/2003 c1 63Tormented Romantic
wonderful, as always, and yet again I completely relate. But I got a little more out of it then just simple change, I saw more of resentment towards simply having to live through life and change just furthers that resentment.
I especially like the lines that read: "all I want is time to stop/for a little while/let me get my bearings/let my (me?) find my place". Those right there just remind me so much of thoughts that crossed my own mind not too long ago.
keep up the WONDERFUL work.
~Tormented Romantic~
63Tormented Romanticwonderful, as always, and yet again I completely relate. But I got a little more out of it then just simple change, I saw more of resentment towards simply having to live through life and change just furthers that resentment.
I especially like the lines that read: "all I want is time to stop/for a little while/let me get my bearings/let my (me?) find my place". Those right there just remind me so much of thoughts that crossed my own mind not too long ago.
keep up the WONDERFUL work.
~Tormented Romantic~
6/29/2003 c1 Frodo
Wow, really good job. I especially liked the ending. Life is crazy, full of ups and downs, and all we can do is let us drag along and hopefully get something out of it. Awesome.
-Frodo
Wow, really good job. I especially liked the ending. Life is crazy, full of ups and downs, and all we can do is let us drag along and hopefully get something out of it. Awesome.
-Frodo