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8/23/2003 c1 ShadowSilver
Wow. O_O Very good. Dale sounds cool. ^_^ But just one minor thing: seperate the paragraphs. Tis a little hard to read, but that didn't bother me much.

BTW, this is going on my favorite stories list. Well written. I'd also like to thank you for reading my story. The next chapter should be out soon. ^_^
8/6/2003 c1 Jayn06
INTRESTING CANT WAITTO SEE WHERE THIS IS GOING ON ANOTHER NOTE HAVE YOU BY ANYVHANCE HAD PROBLEMS WITH THE DOCUMENT MANERGER BECAUSE I HAVE TRYED TO UPLOAD STUFF BUT IT WONT WORK IM NOT SURE IF ITS ONLY ME IF IT IS MABY THERES A PROBLEM WIT THE COMPUTER IF NOT THEN I THINK ITS THE WEBSITE GREAT START

-LITTLE ROSE
7/7/2003 c1 3heavilymedicated
...hmm...I likey. Dale seems cool. I don't know if this was just a one time thing, but it would be rather entertaining if you wrote more about our "Hero" and some of his future advendtures. *shrug* Just a thought.

I would also like to commend you on proper use of SPELLING and GRAMMAR. Such a rare thing to find nowadays *tear tear* Anyway, it makes things much easier to read. It would be cool if you continued Dale's story.

~Toni

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