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7/30/2003 c1 13Dendera
Another example that good poetry needn't be all dripping sentimental prose and sweetness. This poem, though decidedly harsh in tone, was nonetheless very well done. I liked the immediate delve into mundane reality when autopilot intervenes, and the contrast between going on pure emotion and just going through the motions. The final stanza is particularly notable.
7/8/2003 c1 40AvaRicE
Such a sad piece of writing... it is beautiful, in its own way.

You have a special talent with words :)
6/29/2003 c1 KJKfofsuske
Interesting that, in your quest to find Him, you've taken away His capitalized state in protest. An effective tool, and I wonder how many will notice.

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