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5/11/2004 c1 watiwat
do i even have to say anything? yet another great job.
watiwat
11/9/2003 c1 17Ruarc
Hm, you soud like a friend of mine in physics... except she can't write. *shrug* She can draw though. I seem to be the one always stuck in the middle with no talent...

Ah well, this is great. IT's so casual, but it says so much about you. Your descriptions are pretty much perfect.

I don't like to talk.

I don't like to touch.

I don't like to smile.

I really don't like much.

*points up* See, that part's me. Not my friend. That part is... well... very cool? I don't know how to say it. I just love the way it sounds. And the fact that it rhymes is awesome. Amazing poem.
7/19/2003 c1 rumor
Wicked! I loved it..I feel this poem cuz you are describing me in many ways..:-D I love the line: "I'm tired everyday, But never sleep at night." I am commiting the act as I type, groovy job!
7/8/2003 c1 133S.C. Preclarus Noctis
OH MYY GOSSHH! i can relate to this PERFECTLY! It's JUST LIKE ME! OH MY GOSH! it's...i'm so speechless ...its SO GOOD! omg...hahaha im just in shock..its almost EXACTLY like me...ok i'll stop now..haha
6/30/2003 c1 120Heather Montgomery
*grins* Such a cute poem, babe! I love it! It's very easy to relate to. Yes, that's you, and that's why we all love you so much, because you're you and because you're amazing! Amin mela lle!

Hez
6/30/2003 c1 101wildtenderness
WOW!*blinks her eyes a couple of times* that was a VERY VERY VERY VERY beautiful piece.i really mean it!i liked the attitude of this poem,i liked tha way you wrote it..so nonchalant yet so strong!that,was really great..!*smiles*
6/30/2003 c1 63Tormented Romantic
This is great, I think it's so awesome how you can just completely open yourself up to all of us here on fp.net. I especially liked the lines that read: "so sometimes I want to curl up/and never leave my bed" and "you say that I'm no fun/I say that you're just trying/to be like everyone." because I can completely relate to these lines more so than the rest of this piece.

wonderfully done, the rhymes didn't sound forced and everything flowed just right.

-Tormented Romantic
6/30/2003 c1 26IcyDevil27
Rockin' poem. You have talent, keep on writing!

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