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3/15/2005 c2 bellezagotica
*cries* I wanna meet mystery boy! what kind of guy is he gonna be? like, skater boy? I dunno, it doesn't matter, as long as he's sweet. Danielle would be like me, I like to ride my bike past his house (only once, though, it'd look suspicious and I'd freak out if he would happen to come out of the house! *faints*) and then I go straight back to my house. augh, but enough of my dreaming of a love life! I really like what you have so far! It's gonna be really cool! anyways, please update soon! oh, and just a little tip, make sure that you have a capital letter in the beginning of every sentence and punctuation marks in the right places, and soon, you'll be on your way! please update soon! =D
3/15/2005 c1 bellezagotica
first thing, thank you so much for reviewing my story! second, I am terribly sorry about your friend almost dying, AND her mom dying - that's got to be horrible - and her dad. does she live with another family member now? I feel all sad now! I was crying when I wrote my story!your story sounds good so far, but a bit short, but that's okay, cuz when I first started writing (it was actually on Fanfiction.net), I made really short chapters, but as time went, the chapters grew longer. so...who's the new sexy boy? I would LOVE having a cute boy live next to me. well, I kinda do, but it's in the same neighborhood, but like...ten houses or more down (like biking distance), and I know where he lives! tee hee! I love it! YAY FOR SUMMER SEDUCTION! LoL
11/28/2003 c2 22AbbieNormal182
Hey, these were good chapters, but maybe longer? :D :D Longer chapters, a little more phsyical description, and a little more plot development! :D
Abbie
11/2/2003 c2 1Alaryn Drei
Cheat! Cheat! Cheat! lol, good plot. Keep with it :)
10/30/2003 c2 8CraigAPrice
This is a great story. Perfect beggining to it. I can't wait till u put more up. Can't wait to see how the meeting part is and how they get along.
7/20/2003 c2 3Jenn-chan aka KristinaToffland
Hey i like this! great beginning! i've always wanted to write a story on this particular plot, but as you can see, haven't done it yet, so i'll just read yours! great job. but, please come by and read what i do got! i don't think you'll be disappointed, i'm seriously considering publishing so i'm looking for all the feedback i can get, thanks, hope to hear from ya soon, lataz, Kris
6/30/2003 c2 Cedric Diggory
This is good! I came from fanfiction to review this! Azarius told me about it. Hey, I noticed that Hermione is in your email address, so can you review my story of fanfiction called The Crystal Shard?
6/30/2003 c2 Azarius
Too lazy to log-in. I must be mistaken, but I think I saw this story on here before June 30th. Well, anyway, nice fic. You can make it longer though. And check out my story Obsession, please?
6/30/2003 c2 14Orenji Yume
not bad. maybe you could make the chapters longer. anywayz, pls update soon!

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