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7/24/2003 c1 Just Wolf
i loved how you made your words flow - the internal rhymes, the condradictions, the confusion. sounded like fifty birds yellin every morning. very good - the writing was really really incredible.

btw, are you ever going to write more Sugar n til? cos i really loved that story. i justy reread it and its so incredible.
6/30/2003 c1 21Kay Harlow
That was excellent. Your poems are different and unique. They speak to you in a straight forward voice with this raw honesty in the words. They break the conventional barriers and holds of poetry. That's talent. You did an amazing job.
6/30/2003 c1 3Angerona
o i love it. Really words can not express how i feel about this poem it is amazing. I love the part about not wanting to be in the phone book, or at lest thats what i got out of it. And the parat about Fill notebooks with meaningless words...

The whoel thing is relaly really great and i love it. Great work.

~Angerona the Goddess of Death~

P.S It's not getting what cha want, it's wanting what cha got.

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