7/30/2003 c1 47Anjeni Windsinger
You made me miss my childhood days now, lol, and as for missing my innocence... *sigh*
Beautiful poem. Your flow is awesome, and everything that there is to be said.. is pretty much said here :) Those last 4 lines are my favorite.
Keep writing!
You made me miss my childhood days now, lol, and as for missing my innocence... *sigh*
Beautiful poem. Your flow is awesome, and everything that there is to be said.. is pretty much said here :) Those last 4 lines are my favorite.
Keep writing!
6/30/2003 c1 63Tormented Romantic
you're right "this aint too good"...it's GREAT. I think we all miss our days of innocence...*sigh* I know I do. You did a wonderful job of conveying the emotions and everything just flowed so nicely. well done.
-Tormented Romantic-
you're right "this aint too good"...it's GREAT. I think we all miss our days of innocence...*sigh* I know I do. You did a wonderful job of conveying the emotions and everything just flowed so nicely. well done.
-Tormented Romantic-