for You Were There9/16/2003 c1 IntergalacticOctopoda
this was very touching, everything flowed nicely ... taken me awhile to review but i am glad i did. it was truely beautiful.
this was very touching, everything flowed nicely ... taken me awhile to review but i am glad i did. it was truely beautiful.
7/16/2003 c1 Needa S
Beautiful..Awesome job! Sorry for your loss. Great tribute! Thanks for your kind reviews.
Beautiful..Awesome job! Sorry for your loss. Great tribute! Thanks for your kind reviews.
7/15/2003 c1 
9CatieZee
Beautiful, heart-felt poem. The emotion in this is expressed so wonderfully. Thank you for your honesty and great ability to express yourself.
9CatieZeeBeautiful, heart-felt poem. The emotion in this is expressed so wonderfully. Thank you for your honesty and great ability to express yourself.
7/14/2003 c1 3Pont
sulier!
oh, yea, i wrote one of those too.
wow, that was good, it really ran well. i like the smoothness of your poems; they flow really smoothly [sry abt the redundancy]
this is good; almost like a songfic. hm, if i make a tune for it, would you kill me? sry, i have the oddest hobbies. [u can answer in a review, you know who i am ^-^]
namarie!
-pont signing out, 8:21pm
3Pontsulier!
oh, yea, i wrote one of those too.
wow, that was good, it really ran well. i like the smoothness of your poems; they flow really smoothly [sry abt the redundancy]
this is good; almost like a songfic. hm, if i make a tune for it, would you kill me? sry, i have the oddest hobbies. [u can answer in a review, you know who i am ^-^]
namarie!
-pont signing out, 8:21pm
7/1/2003 c1 Pottere
wow...just wow. this is really good, and i give sympathy to you for your loss. keep up the good work.
wow...just wow. this is really good, and i give sympathy to you for your loss. keep up the good work.
7/1/2003 c1 4ColorCrayons
T...amigia...who is this for? i dont know...? anyway, i like this poem, tho i am no poem critic. :)
4ColorCrayonsT...amigia...who is this for? i dont know...? anyway, i like this poem, tho i am no poem critic. :)
7/1/2003 c1 4AcelinWhitefire
There's one thing that a poet can't accomplish with all his or her artistry with words, and that's sincerity. Writing what you really mean and feeling all you say you are makes a poem stand out in a way even a Shakespeare couldn't accomplish without it. I'm being redundant, but you can tell that you really felt everything you wrote in this poem, and that makes it wonderful.
4AcelinWhitefireThere's one thing that a poet can't accomplish with all his or her artistry with words, and that's sincerity. Writing what you really mean and feeling all you say you are makes a poem stand out in a way even a Shakespeare couldn't accomplish without it. I'm being redundant, but you can tell that you really felt everything you wrote in this poem, and that makes it wonderful.