for The Swan9/28/2008 c2 
23JustMiLuc
this is really good work.
you're really good at romance scenes.
please, update this soon!
lol, keep writing,
~coco
23JustMiLucthis is really good work.
you're really good at romance scenes.
please, update this soon!
lol, keep writing,
~coco
5/1/2004 c2 26Endless Nightmares
Hello-
Poor Tallia, hopefully you'll write more like this, because you have a very creative mind for erotic descriptions.
26Endless NightmaresHello-
Poor Tallia, hopefully you'll write more like this, because you have a very creative mind for erotic descriptions.
5/1/2004 c1 Endless Nightmares
Hey Kama-
Damn this graphic stuff. This is ShadowDemon, by the way. The whole chapter is really graphic in the sex department. The story itself, is really good.
Hey Kama-
Damn this graphic stuff. This is ShadowDemon, by the way. The whole chapter is really graphic in the sex department. The story itself, is really good.
8/12/2003 c2 3black velvet rose
not bad. but what happens when the new husband has sex with her and she does have that thingy. what's it called. well i've heard it called a virgin barrier. i forgot the real name. anyway she'll be in deep shit if he finds out.
3black velvet rosenot bad. but what happens when the new husband has sex with her and she does have that thingy. what's it called. well i've heard it called a virgin barrier. i forgot the real name. anyway she'll be in deep shit if he finds out.
7/9/2003 c2 Christine
Great chapter!
definately update soon!
Can't wait for more...
Great chapter!
definately update soon!
Can't wait for more...
7/8/2003 c2 ghrf
update soon! This is turning into a lovely story...
update soon! This is turning into a lovely story...
7/7/2003 c1 Teresz
OH MY GOSH! She's getting married? Gosh dang. Not to mention thuis AMAZING first chapter...and now...now...MARRIAGE to the another guy besides her love...AH! I read more. *hurries off to chapter 2*
OH MY GOSH! She's getting married? Gosh dang. Not to mention thuis AMAZING first chapter...and now...now...MARRIAGE to the another guy besides her love...AH! I read more. *hurries off to chapter 2*
7/7/2003 c2 Mallory Catherine
thats just so sad... but really good! I can't wait for more!
~ Mallory Catherine
thats just so sad... but really good! I can't wait for more!
~ Mallory Catherine
7/1/2003 c1 Li Li 215
I think I like where this is going. Update soon!
I think I like where this is going. Update soon!
7/1/2003 c1 4ToEatTheseApplesFromYourEyes
MUHAHAHAHA! Way to go Tallia! If I was supossed to be a virgin for my obviously forced marriage, then I would make sure not to me one too! I liked this!
4ToEatTheseApplesFromYourEyesMUHAHAHAHA! Way to go Tallia! If I was supossed to be a virgin for my obviously forced marriage, then I would make sure not to me one too! I liked this!
7/1/2003 c1 Jessica
Cool, very cool. Keep it up!
~*~Jessica~*~
Cool, very cool. Keep it up!
~*~Jessica~*~