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7/1/2003 c1 Fearless-Sweep-Gurl
i like it. write more.
7/1/2003 c1 Lucky
r u going to continue?
7/1/2003 c1 5Tsuta
Wow...(speechless) That was very good writing, Are you going to keep going? I thought it was intresting!
7/1/2003 c1 firess
o wow. i dno wat else to say. thats awesome.
7/1/2003 c1 2Alexandria Danielle
Oh well that just sucks... their situation, not you're writing... the writing was great... but thats so sad that she couldnt be with him... anyway it was a very good story
7/1/2003 c1 37wingless
i like this one. your descibe sex like poetry...its beautiful

the ending makes me wonder what is goign to happen. who is the guy she had sex with? anyways if u continue i will check back for updates
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