for Target Practice11/27/2012 c1 Kismet
Lovely. It was witty, told a story, and rhymed, too. But I guess you knew that already. But, yeah. Lovely.
Lovely. It was witty, told a story, and rhymed, too. But I guess you knew that already. But, yeah. Lovely.
11/25/2012 c1 
18FreekyDisaster18
Hey, I'm here to share some exciting news. This story was added to the poetry category over on A Drop of Romeo! :)
Here's the Review:
"Helen Thinks: “Target Practice” is an amazing poem that keep it 100 and I find it an extremely relatable read. I think most people will share the author’s frustration shared about the endless amount of pop-ups and their silly deals that come onto our screens throughout an average internet session. The writing has a catchy, present beat that keeps the pace throughout the poem. As mentioned, the poem has an obvious humorous undertone that will have the reader smiling along as they read – maybe even chuckling! I dare you not to think of this poem the next time a pop-up arrives on your screen..."
18FreekyDisaster18Hey, I'm here to share some exciting news. This story was added to the poetry category over on A Drop of Romeo! :)
Here's the Review:
"Helen Thinks: “Target Practice” is an amazing poem that keep it 100 and I find it an extremely relatable read. I think most people will share the author’s frustration shared about the endless amount of pop-ups and their silly deals that come onto our screens throughout an average internet session. The writing has a catchy, present beat that keeps the pace throughout the poem. As mentioned, the poem has an obvious humorous undertone that will have the reader smiling along as they read – maybe even chuckling! I dare you not to think of this poem the next time a pop-up arrives on your screen..."
12/27/2008 c1 Heise
does the number 1,003,023 mean anything significant
or is it just an apprpriate number for reading the poem out loud without stumbling? :D
does the number 1,003,023 mean anything significant
or is it just an apprpriate number for reading the poem out loud without stumbling? :D
8/22/2006 c1 31Chaotic Demon
That was awesome! Now I'm gona think of this poem everytim I see a pop-up.
31Chaotic DemonThat was awesome! Now I'm gona think of this poem everytim I see a pop-up.
5/5/2005 c1 23SubliminalAnarchy
Hey, this is a really funny poem. Extremely true, as well. Awesome job! :-D
23SubliminalAnarchyHey, this is a really funny poem. Extremely true, as well. Awesome job! :-D
2/19/2005 c1 31emptyword
*laughs* That was great! I can't believe I missed reading this one...Really, it's fantastic. *smothers laughter*
31emptyword*laughs* That was great! I can't believe I missed reading this one...Really, it's fantastic. *smothers laughter*
2/14/2005 c1 5BeaumontRulz
omg that was so good! haha i could never come up with something like that...i'm just bad at making things rhyme lol. i loved it!::Alex::
5BeaumontRulzomg that was so good! haha i could never come up with something like that...i'm just bad at making things rhyme lol. i loved it!::Alex::
1/16/2005 c1 1darkdragonfly
Stupid pop-ups...I hate them too! Actually, I'm lucky, I've got something called AdZapper. It stops them popping up and makes a cool bugzap sound. Way cool!
Nice poem, loadsa talent there!
Rock on, keep smiling
Debbie x
1darkdragonflyStupid pop-ups...I hate them too! Actually, I'm lucky, I've got something called AdZapper. It stops them popping up and makes a cool bugzap sound. Way cool!
Nice poem, loadsa talent there!
Rock on, keep smiling
Debbie x
12/29/2004 c1 crazy-lady141
Pop ups suck! But I have quite a good blocker, but they still slip past! :(
Pop ups suck! But I have quite a good blocker, but they still slip past! :(
8/29/2004 c1 Kim
So true, so true...
So true, so true...
6/21/2004 c1 The Xylia
Hehe. I agree.
Hehe. I agree.