for Fool7/16/2003 c1 
14Dirty Wallpaper
this was a very good poem, its concept was strong and you really described it well. i like you phrasing, its abruptness. it gives it a really confused and out of control feeling. kudos
14Dirty Wallpaperthis was a very good poem, its concept was strong and you really described it well. i like you phrasing, its abruptness. it gives it a really confused and out of control feeling. kudos
7/8/2003 c1 Wrong Name Tag
Pretty cool... There's a little bit of awkward phrasing, but otherwise it's short and very nicely done. Great job
~Jess
Pretty cool... There's a little bit of awkward phrasing, but otherwise it's short and very nicely done. Great job
~Jess