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4/8/2006 c1 RANDOM
You know what, I never really understood that haiku thing anyway, so don't feel bad, feel good! You just wrote a work of art that I tried to explain to someone! I was trying to tell them if they had done anything different at all the fate of the whole world might have changed! See, you're good!
11/23/2003 c1 1Marshmallow Vampire
I like! Very beutiful...but then again I'm one of those people who finds beuty in dust and sunlight and shadows of wings. I like the idea behind it, a very important one indeed! Keep writting Haiku, you're good at it!
7/17/2003 c1 Angele Raye
A very respectable haiku attempt. You've succeeded. (I however, have never been able to succeed in spelling that word, so... there you go.)

~Angele Raye~
7/3/2003 c1 76CoolBeans18s
Very good.

~ CoolBeans18s
7/1/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
Great work.

~Heart of the Sword

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