for Uprooted9/25/2004 c13 Seina
Wow, that was really great. I'm really hooked on Jamison, now. And I'm insanely curious about Jay. It will all come out in time, though. I love this story. It's really different, but a great idea. Being different is how you get noticed. If only I could figure that out... ~Lady Merlin
Wow, that was really great. I'm really hooked on Jamison, now. And I'm insanely curious about Jay. It will all come out in time, though. I love this story. It's really different, but a great idea. Being different is how you get noticed. If only I could figure that out... ~Lady Merlin
9/5/2004 c13 Furbs
I love, love, love this story! Can you say mixed up love to the max or what? The whole love/crush stuff with both Lily and Rose is really interesting. But the thing that interests me the most is learning about all of their pasts (everyone's too, not just Lily's and Rose's). You give us a little bit each time to keep us satisfied, but never too much. However, you need some big, huge conflict soon, like in the next 2 or 3 chapters, because if not it'll drag on a little to long without a major conflict. It's been way good so far and I can't wait till the next update to learn more about their pasts! Chapters 12 and 13: "This is so classically becoming the first day of school that I just want to barf all over the floor."
I love, love, love this story! Can you say mixed up love to the max or what? The whole love/crush stuff with both Lily and Rose is really interesting. But the thing that interests me the most is learning about all of their pasts (everyone's too, not just Lily's and Rose's). You give us a little bit each time to keep us satisfied, but never too much. However, you need some big, huge conflict soon, like in the next 2 or 3 chapters, because if not it'll drag on a little to long without a major conflict. It's been way good so far and I can't wait till the next update to learn more about their pasts! Chapters 12 and 13: "This is so classically becoming the first day of school that I just want to barf all over the floor."
9/4/2004 c1 
1MyVeryOwnDreamland
omg this story is really really really good, i really like "The music that was flating out of the speakers"
1MyVeryOwnDreamlandomg this story is really really really good, i really like "The music that was flating out of the speakers"
8/20/2004 c13 87EchoesOfReason
An update YAY. Now I'm the happiest person in the world. Very nice chapter. Although I wish it was that easy to shut your brain off huh! Well it was still an amazing chapter. I'm sorry I'd love to leave a longer review but I've got to run. Take care, great job, and good luck!
Love,
a.twisted.soul
87EchoesOfReasonAn update YAY. Now I'm the happiest person in the world. Very nice chapter. Although I wish it was that easy to shut your brain off huh! Well it was still an amazing chapter. I'm sorry I'd love to leave a longer review but I've got to run. Take care, great job, and good luck!
Love,
a.twisted.soul
8/19/2004 c13 9Greatheart
I love it, I love it, I love it! I'm so glad that you updated and didn't give up on this story. It all seems so real. I love the lovelorn teenagers and the two main characters. It all seems so real, like these are people that I've met. Please, PLEASE! Update again soon! Wonderfully wonderful!
~Alaina
9GreatheartI love it, I love it, I love it! I'm so glad that you updated and didn't give up on this story. It all seems so real. I love the lovelorn teenagers and the two main characters. It all seems so real, like these are people that I've met. Please, PLEASE! Update again soon! Wonderfully wonderful!
~Alaina
8/19/2004 c13 4thisspiltmilk
liz, this so rocks. i love it. esp the insite into rose's past. i really like rose she's my favorite. i also really like shawn and joel. so anyways, dont take so long to update next time cause i might die. i love this story!
4thisspiltmilkliz, this so rocks. i love it. esp the insite into rose's past. i really like rose she's my favorite. i also really like shawn and joel. so anyways, dont take so long to update next time cause i might die. i love this story!
8/15/2004 c1 2JupGrrl
I've read til Chapter Four so far, and one thing I can say is that you write really well. Your descriptions of the settings were particularly good and really captured my attention.
Forgive me for not continuing to read more now, but I'll be back!
2JupGrrlI've read til Chapter Four so far, and one thing I can say is that you write really well. Your descriptions of the settings were particularly good and really captured my attention.
Forgive me for not continuing to read more now, but I'll be back!
8/8/2004 c12 Seina
Oh, this is turning into a very tangled web of love, huh? I really like it, write more soon. ~Lady Merlin
Oh, this is turning into a very tangled web of love, huh? I really like it, write more soon. ~Lady Merlin
7/15/2004 c3 Seina
Ooh...I like Shae, too. But Rose is kinda bitter. But I still like her. ~Lady Merlin
Ooh...I like Shae, too. But Rose is kinda bitter. But I still like her. ~Lady Merlin
7/15/2004 c2 Seina
I like Shawn. And Rose. And Lily. And Dylan. And Joel. But mostly Shawn and Rose. ~Lady Merlin
I like Shawn. And Rose. And Lily. And Dylan. And Joel. But mostly Shawn and Rose. ~Lady Merlin
7/15/2004 c1 Seina
Hey, sounds interesting... and figited is spelled fidgeted. Sorry, but typos drive me insane. Pet peeve. ~Lady Merlin
Hey, sounds interesting... and figited is spelled fidgeted. Sorry, but typos drive me insane. Pet peeve. ~Lady Merlin
7/15/2004 c5 6Little Monkey Child
wow, i'm likin' this a lot. as i said before, it's a terrific story, and the opposites are great. one terrific thing about it is that you display more than one opinion about things such as religion, death, so on and so forth, as rose and lily think differently on so many things. the only piece of C.C. that i have is that i think that some of the things that rose is doing are contradicting her general character, and that so many people are being introduced at once that it's hard to keep track of them all. alright, that's all i have to say, and if there's a perfectly good reason for both of the things, then i apologize profusely for ever doubting. great job!
~Little Monkey Child
6Little Monkey Childwow, i'm likin' this a lot. as i said before, it's a terrific story, and the opposites are great. one terrific thing about it is that you display more than one opinion about things such as religion, death, so on and so forth, as rose and lily think differently on so many things. the only piece of C.C. that i have is that i think that some of the things that rose is doing are contradicting her general character, and that so many people are being introduced at once that it's hard to keep track of them all. alright, that's all i have to say, and if there's a perfectly good reason for both of the things, then i apologize profusely for ever doubting. great job!
~Little Monkey Child
7/15/2004 c1 Little Monkey Child
hey, i like! i'm just reviewing the first chapter first, as... well, i guess it's kind of a habit. anyways- the story is terrific, and i'd have to say that one of your strongest points seems to be description. honestly, it's fantastic. rose seems like a bit of an angsty girl, and lily's pretty much the opposite, but it seems pretty good, and i like how you change the points of view so nobody ends up hating one character due to another character's personal feelings about one of them. if i'm started to ramble...well, that's good-it means i have a lot to say. usually that means i'm interested. great story, keep writing, and i'll be back to review in a couple chapters, as you're right, reviews are great things to get.
~Little Monkey Child
hey, i like! i'm just reviewing the first chapter first, as... well, i guess it's kind of a habit. anyways- the story is terrific, and i'd have to say that one of your strongest points seems to be description. honestly, it's fantastic. rose seems like a bit of an angsty girl, and lily's pretty much the opposite, but it seems pretty good, and i like how you change the points of view so nobody ends up hating one character due to another character's personal feelings about one of them. if i'm started to ramble...well, that's good-it means i have a lot to say. usually that means i'm interested. great story, keep writing, and i'll be back to review in a couple chapters, as you're right, reviews are great things to get.
~Little Monkey Child
6/10/2004 c12 tara
Liz, this is soo good I can't wait for the next chapter.. I am just so caught up in the characters and..Oh I jsut love it, it is so good. Wow well I'll talk to you later.
Liz, this is soo good I can't wait for the next chapter.. I am just so caught up in the characters and..Oh I jsut love it, it is so good. Wow well I'll talk to you later.