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11/18/2003 c1 12kalariah
This has a good rhythm to it, and I like the rhyme scheme. It might make a little more sense to readers if it was written as three short stanzas, or something along those lines. But whatever; it was good.
10/29/2003 c1 1Tigress-of-Shang
hey u forgot rats.

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