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9/5/2003 c1 148JJR Meerraf
I think I get it, but I'm not sure... honestly I'm not one for short poems but this one is pretty cool.
7/18/2003 c1 4Mal'lhasbelin
Cute... that was a bit brief but it was well written

Simone
7/2/2003 c1 126swift sky silver
u're rite, i don't get it, but i still like the rhyme scheme=0)
7/2/2003 c1 3Tenika D
Awesome! I love how you keep the rythm throughout the whole poem. You did a wonderfull job. Don't worry about 'dear' being spelled 'deer', I like it. It shows a willingness to step outside of the box.

Tenika Dargan

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