for ReGreT3/23/2004 c1 ying zheng
simple and to the point. But death is a part of life. Humans rage war on each other because, isnt that just what we do?
simple and to the point. But death is a part of life. Humans rage war on each other because, isnt that just what we do?
7/29/2003 c1 ColorCrayons
this was really good and very deep. i can only say maybe dont have it be so long, sometimes in poems we tend to drag it on and on. so be careful not to babble and shove your thoughts into others heads, state what needs to be stated and that is that.
i thought, however, that it was extremely well written. kudos to you and your brother. your message was a good one and true, it also shows us your pov on life. greatness. in exception to what i mentioned before, i thought that it was well written and the beat flowed.
~color outside the lines~
this was really good and very deep. i can only say maybe dont have it be so long, sometimes in poems we tend to drag it on and on. so be careful not to babble and shove your thoughts into others heads, state what needs to be stated and that is that.
i thought, however, that it was extremely well written. kudos to you and your brother. your message was a good one and true, it also shows us your pov on life. greatness. in exception to what i mentioned before, i thought that it was well written and the beat flowed.
~color outside the lines~
7/16/2003 c1 
1Pirouette
Well i like this poem, even tho my own poems are the opposite, but i like it none the less.
1PirouetteWell i like this poem, even tho my own poems are the opposite, but i like it none the less.
7/2/2003 c1 joie 610
wow! powerful! i think all is true except for the fact that 'there is no peace.' excellent work, silver tigeress! keep writing and rock on!
wow! powerful! i think all is true except for the fact that 'there is no peace.' excellent work, silver tigeress! keep writing and rock on!