for Her Destiny10/6/2005 c22 asga
o.O i like this hope u continue this soon ne
o.O i like this hope u continue this soon ne
10/22/2004 c22 lostinscotland
::sigh:: and once again, i am somewhat behind the times. how do i always manage to do that?
ah, well...very interesting. i must say, elizabeth is quite...blargh...easily angered? if that's the word i want. of course, pregnancy does things to you, but i don't think it's that. i agree with her that husbands shouldn't order wives around...but wow, she's touchy. personally, i like a man who's got that whole leadership thing going for him. but that's just me. i'm an old-fashioned person like that, i guess.
woot, big house! i wish i had a house i could get lost in. well, no, actually...i daresay that would be rather inconvenient everytime i had to go somewhere. i'd get fired everytime i got a job! ::sigh::
ok, well, i think i'll shut up now. i need to go to bed anyway. after i write a bloody essay. argh, argh, argh, and again i say argh!
ok, well, g'night to ye! and update again soon, yes?
::sigh:: and once again, i am somewhat behind the times. how do i always manage to do that?
ah, well...very interesting. i must say, elizabeth is quite...blargh...easily angered? if that's the word i want. of course, pregnancy does things to you, but i don't think it's that. i agree with her that husbands shouldn't order wives around...but wow, she's touchy. personally, i like a man who's got that whole leadership thing going for him. but that's just me. i'm an old-fashioned person like that, i guess.
woot, big house! i wish i had a house i could get lost in. well, no, actually...i daresay that would be rather inconvenient everytime i had to go somewhere. i'd get fired everytime i got a job! ::sigh::
ok, well, i think i'll shut up now. i need to go to bed anyway. after i write a bloody essay. argh, argh, argh, and again i say argh!
ok, well, g'night to ye! and update again soon, yes?
6/24/2004 c22 passion101
wow, it's been awhile! But, it was long enough. I liked it a lot.
wow, it's been awhile! But, it was long enough. I liked it a lot.
6/21/2004 c22 
16Mackenzie Rose
Yay! Finally a new chapter! Very nice. And what's Katie up to? Will we see it soon? I think the baby should SO be a son! I'm sorry about your boyfriend... guys suck. And yay for your B in physics... I got a B in physics too. God that killed me. I worked SO hard for that thing! Yay for us! But yes, good chapter! Don't keep me waiting too long please.
Mac
P.S.
I'm glad you like my stories. ^_^ I re-vamped my Pirates story, so there's some new things added in and it's better (I think).
16Mackenzie RoseYay! Finally a new chapter! Very nice. And what's Katie up to? Will we see it soon? I think the baby should SO be a son! I'm sorry about your boyfriend... guys suck. And yay for your B in physics... I got a B in physics too. God that killed me. I worked SO hard for that thing! Yay for us! But yes, good chapter! Don't keep me waiting too long please.
Mac
P.S.
I'm glad you like my stories. ^_^ I re-vamped my Pirates story, so there's some new things added in and it's better (I think).
6/21/2004 c22 7faeries-flame
Wow! Finally, an update! I loved this chapter! Congratulations on your grade on AP Physics, wow, you must be smart, eh? :)
Sorry to hear that your boyfriend broke up with you...I kinda know how you feel, since I recently broke up with my boyfriend, :( Well, I hope you have better luck next time.
~faeries-flame
7faeries-flameWow! Finally, an update! I loved this chapter! Congratulations on your grade on AP Physics, wow, you must be smart, eh? :)
Sorry to hear that your boyfriend broke up with you...I kinda know how you feel, since I recently broke up with my boyfriend, :( Well, I hope you have better luck next time.
~faeries-flame
6/21/2004 c22 LaFleurRouge
Oh wow, Ihaven't read any of this story in awhile. After I started reading I remembered more and more. Can't wait until the next chapter, I hope you'll throw in some twist to keep your readers on their toes. Until the next chapter...
Oh wow, Ihaven't read any of this story in awhile. After I started reading I remembered more and more. Can't wait until the next chapter, I hope you'll throw in some twist to keep your readers on their toes. Until the next chapter...
3/13/2004 c21 lostinscotland
...i read this like forever ago, and never reviewed. terribly sorry about that.
anyhow, very good. katie amuses me, david is still evil, and yeah. yay america!
...i read this like forever ago, and never reviewed. terribly sorry about that.
anyhow, very good. katie amuses me, david is still evil, and yeah. yay america!
2/21/2004 c21 Flamehail
Yay! I finally got around to things a bit. I'm not dead, really, I promise I'm not. ^_^
Typos:
**"before your go on" = "before you go on"
**It's "dying" not "dieing"
**Umm, still some "your"s instead of "you're"s. The former indicates possession (my coat, your gloves), the latter, a contraction (you are going to love this = you're going to love this). If you try writing in the full phrase (you are) and then going back and contracting it to "you're", you ought to improve a bit.
**Commas, commas. You're (not your!) getting better, though there are still some problems. Still, improvement is good.
Katie is an evil tricksy one, isn't she? Can't wait to find out what happens.
I suppose you achieve good grammar technique through practice more than anything else. I'm not sure. It's always just made sense to me-luckily for you, no? ^_^
'Til next time,
Flamehail
Yay! I finally got around to things a bit. I'm not dead, really, I promise I'm not. ^_^
Typos:
**"before your go on" = "before you go on"
**It's "dying" not "dieing"
**Umm, still some "your"s instead of "you're"s. The former indicates possession (my coat, your gloves), the latter, a contraction (you are going to love this = you're going to love this). If you try writing in the full phrase (you are) and then going back and contracting it to "you're", you ought to improve a bit.
**Commas, commas. You're (not your!) getting better, though there are still some problems. Still, improvement is good.
Katie is an evil tricksy one, isn't she? Can't wait to find out what happens.
I suppose you achieve good grammar technique through practice more than anything else. I'm not sure. It's always just made sense to me-luckily for you, no? ^_^
'Til next time,
Flamehail
2/20/2004 c21 Kelley
I love this story! I've been reading it for a while lol. Please update...what's the deal with Katie? She isn't gonna do anything that'll hurt Elizabeth, Gregory, or David, is she? I hope not..lol. But this is brilliant..keep it up! :)
I love this story! I've been reading it for a while lol. Please update...what's the deal with Katie? She isn't gonna do anything that'll hurt Elizabeth, Gregory, or David, is she? I hope not..lol. But this is brilliant..keep it up! :)
2/12/2004 c2 lux perpetua
this is an awesome start to a story! Most time-travel tales are rather formulaic, but having Stephanie engaged definately added some variety. (One girl on our floor also left college to get married...surreal...)
I was wondering if you would like to read one of my stories. It's set in the Victorian Era, and it's called Chancery Court: A Romance. (Actually, it's more of a fantasy/thriller... I'm not that good with genre!) It has a dastardly villain, a valiant schoolmistress, and a rebellious young aristocrat. I think you'll enjoy it!
~rose
this is an awesome start to a story! Most time-travel tales are rather formulaic, but having Stephanie engaged definately added some variety. (One girl on our floor also left college to get married...surreal...)
I was wondering if you would like to read one of my stories. It's set in the Victorian Era, and it's called Chancery Court: A Romance. (Actually, it's more of a fantasy/thriller... I'm not that good with genre!) It has a dastardly villain, a valiant schoolmistress, and a rebellious young aristocrat. I think you'll enjoy it!
~rose
2/8/2004 c21 16Mackenzie Rose
Heheheh sorry, I can't help it. Well this was a great chapter. Elizabeth's pregnant! WAHO! Boy or girl? *bounces around excitedly* I can't wait!
Mac
16Mackenzie RoseHeheheh sorry, I can't help it. Well this was a great chapter. Elizabeth's pregnant! WAHO! Boy or girl? *bounces around excitedly* I can't wait!
Mac
2/6/2004 c2 4Crimson2
This is a really good story! I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters...and moving on haha
4Crimson2This is a really good story! I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters...and moving on haha
2/6/2004 c21 22DragonLady of Avalon
Oh, yay, a baby. ^_^ And my writer's block is over...after about a week with a word processor just out of my reach. ~_~;. Speaking of which, i'm almost done with my pet novel. Weird feeling...
22DragonLady of AvalonOh, yay, a baby. ^_^ And my writer's block is over...after about a week with a word processor just out of my reach. ~_~;. Speaking of which, i'm almost done with my pet novel. Weird feeling...