for SnOwFlAkes8/10/2005 c1 brak
great story! you wrote that in 5th grade? the poor old man died? did i understand that right? but the death was very beautiful.-and i don't say beautiful a lot!
great story! you wrote that in 5th grade? the poor old man died? did i understand that right? but the death was very beautiful.-and i don't say beautiful a lot!
4/30/2005 c1 
1autumnwood
This is great. Very pretty. I cannot believe you were only 10 when writing this. My only criticism would be the tense, kinda. It only switched back and forth a tiny bit, but when I read, that kinda thing jumps out and bugs me. Anywho, twas lovely.~Spicy
1autumnwoodThis is great. Very pretty. I cannot believe you were only 10 when writing this. My only criticism would be the tense, kinda. It only switched back and forth a tiny bit, but when I read, that kinda thing jumps out and bugs me. Anywho, twas lovely.~Spicy
7/6/2003 c1 2ermie
LOL! That is the cutest thing I've ever read. You know what else? Your profile is so creative and hilarious... you should try your hand at writing a humor story. I think you'd be great, honestly! :D
OOh hey, check out my stories if you get a chance and let me know what you think, okay? THanks!
2ermieLOL! That is the cutest thing I've ever read. You know what else? Your profile is so creative and hilarious... you should try your hand at writing a humor story. I think you'd be great, honestly! :D
OOh hey, check out my stories if you get a chance and let me know what you think, okay? THanks!