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9/10/2003 c1 25OracleVIII
Oh, I really liked this write. Too bad we are mortals, but in a way it is a good thing we are...keep writing.
8/12/2003 c1 26Shimagami
Yeah. I can understand what you feel. You really draw the readers into the mode of the poem. Nicely done!
8/7/2003 c1 132mizu no kokoro
hee. hee! i'm mortal! yay :) or not? Mwhahahaha~ Goods work, very!
8/2/2003 c1 3Lady Jenn of Ravenclaw
This was so sad. I didnt know whether to cry or whether to be happy about finding such a great peice of literature ..
7/21/2003 c1 70insert name here
i really liked this poem and all of ur other works, but as this was my favorite i decided to review this one, good job, great style many claps, tre bien mon ami

~brendz

(tysm for r/rin my poem)
7/17/2003 c1 the soppy hobbit
I liked this a lot. It reminds me of LOTR (Aragorn and Arwen) but that's no bad thing. It's beautiful.
7/10/2003 c1 9J.L.Tinsley
I like the repetitive sayings that you put in here, "For he was just a mortal". Somehow I can't help but think of Aragorn and Arwen!

Very beautiful, as always!

Keep up the good work!

Toodles,

~Rani~
7/10/2003 c1 23Shalott13
I loved this - this was amazing. I love the wording, and the sentences are chosen beautifully. I especially like how you repeated "just a mortal" in each of the stanzas - nice touch. I look forward to reading more.
7/7/2003 c1 77ForgottenMists
Very interesting. :) Sad though. :( But it's supposed to be, is it not. And thnx for reviewing my story.
7/6/2003 c1 Tusaki Hibiki
m...i like! You're good at this ^.^ and i'll take youre advive in to account also and thanks for the review!
7/4/2003 c1 126swift sky silver
aw, this was very well written. keep writing=0)
7/4/2003 c1 61Disturbances within
wow, i really like this piece! it flows nicely and has a good rythym. i would love to have your opinion on some of my stuff!

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