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7/23/2004 c1 32Lounalune
That's so beautiful!
10/2/2003 c1 74LadyAnesta
very nice :)
7/18/2003 c1 5Nonki
Good! ^_^
7/10/2003 c1 76CoolBeans18s
The syllables were a little off, but I loved it! Short & sweet!

~ CoolBeans18s
7/9/2003 c1 Bibliomania
Is there an undertone?
7/6/2003 c1 6Talon Tearine
Short and so sweet! ^-^
7/5/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
Bravo!
7/4/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
True.

~Heart of the Sword
7/4/2003 c1 Transparent Eyes
Usually I wouldn't review something like this but you had your little "r/r" posted so I thought I would take a stab at it. I had to read this poem over to get some meaning out of it. It's probably just me, but poems this short are void of any substanial meaning. I see the wind could stand for trouble in your life but it doesn't harden you heart...but it just ends, like BAM, and I was left thinking, what just happened?
7/4/2003 c1 16little6wolf
hey!

nice! But, not to be offensive but, gently has 2 syllables! So you would need one more word on the second line!

But, it was still good.

Keep up the good work!

~little6wolf~

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