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8/11/2004 c1 30Weeba
Nicely done. A nice image of how daylight can change things around. Lovely.
3/10/2004 c1 41Jezebel Malice
ohh...i like
yah, im here cause you told me to look
on to the stories!
2/5/2004 c1 5Jessica Tudor
I like story poems. I like the spin at the end, where it happens even in the day time. I'm not sure how I feel about the lines "Until I get home/When I arrive home" just for the repitition of the word "home." All in all, not bad.
2/5/2004 c1 Maggie
Whoa, I dont think it's normal for people to hear voices when they walk through a graveyard...yeah anyways...it gave a good/creepy visual. Nice job Beans!
2/4/2004 c1 28Tk.T
I don't see why no one has reviewed this poem, it is very good! It is kind of chilling and eerie- but in a good way! Keep writing, you're very good!
Happy writing.
Ps. If you get the time plz read Friend of Mine by Tk.T
Tk.T~

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