for Strike Team Apollo2/7/2006 c3 blacklab
Hey I found out what happened with the story, I Accidentally loaded the rough draft I was working on instead of the final draft. It is now named metamorphisis manison if you want to check it out. I have another story that you might want to check out also http:/w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=2106713
Now about your apollo story I was thinking about how to make it better, So I came up with 1. telling how thr computer became corrupt or acts wicked 2. say where artie comes from, maybe add a special ability( I do this alot)
Hey I found out what happened with the story, I Accidentally loaded the rough draft I was working on instead of the final draft. It is now named metamorphisis manison if you want to check it out. I have another story that you might want to check out also http:/w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=2106713
Now about your apollo story I was thinking about how to make it better, So I came up with 1. telling how thr computer became corrupt or acts wicked 2. say where artie comes from, maybe add a special ability( I do this alot)
2/6/2006 c2 blacklab
Just to answer your questions I don't plan on rising the rating of this story since I try to write transformation stories that everyone would like to read not just the sick people of the world ( if you think it's already there leave me a review and I'll either raise the rating (hate to do ) or recycle the material into other stories). Thanks for all the suggestions I planned on putting the organ grinder later in the story as the music that calms the savage beast if you have any other things you would like to say please leave another review even on another story if you have to.
Just to answer your questions I don't plan on rising the rating of this story since I try to write transformation stories that everyone would like to read not just the sick people of the world ( if you think it's already there leave me a review and I'll either raise the rating (hate to do ) or recycle the material into other stories). Thanks for all the suggestions I planned on putting the organ grinder later in the story as the music that calms the savage beast if you have any other things you would like to say please leave another review even on another story if you have to.
2/1/2006 c1 blacklab
here is the links you wanted http:/w.lycanon.org/story/This one has some adult material on it that's why I left there http:/w.sapphireplace.com/fb/
here is the links you wanted http:/w.lycanon.org/story/This one has some adult material on it that's why I left there http:/w.sapphireplace.com/fb/
3/31/2005 c1 
3GotinksX
Hey I thought that i would read this...and i don't quite understand it..you have a weird way of writing but its cool though..i'll read more.
3GotinksXHey I thought that i would read this...and i don't quite understand it..you have a weird way of writing but its cool though..i'll read more.