for Whats On TV: Episode 3: Vampire Mosquitos11/30/2003 c1 
12Fairyflame
This is very funny! And I think the format is perfect and very easy to read.
12FairyflameThis is very funny! And I think the format is perfect and very easy to read.
7/6/2003 c1 Iameverything
I actually thought it was funny. I mean, the stoner theme does drag on eventually, but thats with every stoner writing. And I thought that the script format was perfect, considering how that is the way a script is supposed to be formatted.
I actually thought it was funny. I mean, the stoner theme does drag on eventually, but thats with every stoner writing. And I thought that the script format was perfect, considering how that is the way a script is supposed to be formatted.
7/6/2003 c1 Iameverything
I actually thought it was funny. I mean, the stoner theme does drag on eventually, but thats with every stoner writing. And I thought that the script format was perfect, considering how that is the way a script is supposed to be formatted.
I actually thought it was funny. I mean, the stoner theme does drag on eventually, but thats with every stoner writing. And I thought that the script format was perfect, considering how that is the way a script is supposed to be formatted.
7/5/2003 c1 4Starlit Vapor
Well, I'll try to give you a 'well rounded critique' as I don't think you just want a simple 'I love it' or 'I hate it' answer.
There were one or two things that I enjoied about the text itself, and I liked that it wasn't all in the same paragraph like so much stuff I read here is. But I didn't like the script format of it (For example, the story reading GEORGE: No. Dude, I was there instead of "No. Dude,I was there," George said.
4Starlit VaporWell, I'll try to give you a 'well rounded critique' as I don't think you just want a simple 'I love it' or 'I hate it' answer.
There were one or two things that I enjoied about the text itself, and I liked that it wasn't all in the same paragraph like so much stuff I read here is. But I didn't like the script format of it (For example, the story reading GEORGE: No. Dude, I was there instead of "No. Dude,I was there," George said.