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11/7/2005 c1 23Stormyfirefly2
i like. im definately feeling this today...
7/20/2003 c1 47The intellect
i reli like this, dark yet enlighting.

ive felt like this too lately... unfortunately.

love the repeative verses, works reli wel! ;-

the intellect x
7/18/2003 c1 100broken wings241
I could never keep walking... apologies for this if you wish I would, but you're my best friend, and unfourtunately, I love you too much to keep walking.

Family sux. Most often, they *would* keep walking. I know mine would.

Remember what you always say:

Friends are the family you choose.
7/9/2003 c1 5faerie penguin
the only words that come to mind when reading this are: incredible strength

maybe that's not the image you're trying to convey, but i feel like the narrator has this strength that is patient, knowing, simple, but incredible


7/6/2003 c1 18Iammealso-JC
Did someone stupidly die? I write a lot of poetry like this. It's like you're bipolar, or have multiple personalities.
7/6/2003 c1 57NeWriter
This is really... strange. It´s good.. I got it at the end that it´s set in a place... * stares* nice repetition! the feelings get tell you that you don´t want them to see you, just to avoid the pain... something like that, no? =D!
7/5/2003 c1 126swift sky silver
so true... i can relate. keep writing=0)

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