for Pretend8/25/2003 c1 psycho tabby cat
Great poem!
Somehow really works, I don't read alot of poetry... but i find it funny how sometimes the less words there are the clearer it is... m hopefully you get what I mean. I think this poem somehow really captures the feeling of sort of allways wearing a mask, of pretending so life can go by... And the fact that this image/feeling can be conveyed by so few words I find amazing. Sorry if i'm not coherent,
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Great poem!
Somehow really works, I don't read alot of poetry... but i find it funny how sometimes the less words there are the clearer it is... m hopefully you get what I mean. I think this poem somehow really captures the feeling of sort of allways wearing a mask, of pretending so life can go by... And the fact that this image/feeling can be conveyed by so few words I find amazing. Sorry if i'm not coherent,
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7/18/2003 c1 
100broken wings241
But the word conform will always arouse our contempt and some people *strange & suspicious cough that sounds a lot like popular people* will always pretend.
But we'll always be real, right punk-friend?
"Sometimes its easier to live the lie."
- Handreddy, "Catch Me If You Can"
100broken wings241But the word conform will always arouse our contempt and some people *strange & suspicious cough that sounds a lot like popular people* will always pretend.
But we'll always be real, right punk-friend?
"Sometimes its easier to live the lie."
- Handreddy, "Catch Me If You Can"
7/6/2003 c1 18Iammealso-JC
cool. I didn't read the summary. I gather it talks about the insecurities of the in-crowd. Am i right?
It's totally cool. I love it.
18Iammealso-JCcool. I didn't read the summary. I gather it talks about the insecurities of the in-crowd. Am i right?
It's totally cool. I love it.
7/6/2003 c1 Mage LeeBee
As long as we "pretend" there is a great divide, there always will be. Some say human nature means it will always be, and if so, be content to walk on your side of the river, you can still catch the same fish.
As long as we "pretend" there is a great divide, there always will be. Some say human nature means it will always be, and if so, be content to walk on your side of the river, you can still catch the same fish.
7/5/2003 c1 126swift sky silver
who are "they"? nevertheless, this got the point through. nice job=0)
126swift sky silverwho are "they"? nevertheless, this got the point through. nice job=0)