for Paradoxical Feelings11/19/2003 c1 
25suicidel angel
another really brilliant poem, the way you play with words is absolutely fantastic, it really captures attention.
25suicidel angelanother really brilliant poem, the way you play with words is absolutely fantastic, it really captures attention.
7/18/2003 c1 100broken wings241
It's not conflicting if you stand on your head and look at it from another angle.
Love is hate.
Black is white.
Light is dark.
Up is down.
Harry Potter is Lord Voldemort.
Good is evil.
God is the devil.
Opposites are one and same, it's just that in humanity's insane urge to label everything, we had to give unified forces different names.
100broken wings241It's not conflicting if you stand on your head and look at it from another angle.
Love is hate.
Black is white.
Light is dark.
Up is down.
Harry Potter is Lord Voldemort.
Good is evil.
God is the devil.
Opposites are one and same, it's just that in humanity's insane urge to label everything, we had to give unified forces different names.
7/18/2003 c1 53Jupiter's Tears
I feel like this towards my parents sometimes. It's sad really.
Thanks for the review!
Peace,
Tears
53Jupiter's TearsI feel like this towards my parents sometimes. It's sad really.
Thanks for the review!
Peace,
Tears
7/9/2003 c1 5faerie penguin
wow. incredible, again.
i know i've review just about everything you've written, and the same with you for me, but i have to say that you are a really freakishly good writer, although you get your real inspiration from your pain, just like me.
keep up the good work, keep writing, keep reviewing. your reviews help me a lot, i'm kind of one of those people who needs to be needed. (needed isn't really the right word, but you know what i mean)
on a final note, i feel like in your poetry, you express my own pain and anger, although you have experienced much more than i have.
you're a real inspiration to me.
thanks.
irene
FP
5faerie penguinwow. incredible, again.
i know i've review just about everything you've written, and the same with you for me, but i have to say that you are a really freakishly good writer, although you get your real inspiration from your pain, just like me.
keep up the good work, keep writing, keep reviewing. your reviews help me a lot, i'm kind of one of those people who needs to be needed. (needed isn't really the right word, but you know what i mean)
on a final note, i feel like in your poetry, you express my own pain and anger, although you have experienced much more than i have.
you're a real inspiration to me.
thanks.
irene
FP
7/8/2003 c1 47The intellect
wow, first one i read and i like ur style! im sorry 2 say but my family is like this but ull grow up and move out, dats the way it goes (sigh)
x
47The intellectwow, first one i read and i like ur style! im sorry 2 say but my family is like this but ull grow up and move out, dats the way it goes (sigh)
x
7/6/2003 c1 18Iammealso-JC
What's with the repetition? I try not to do that in my poetry. Thankyou for the review. You are going on my favorite authors list. i like your poem. I wrote a poem like that once, only it's a lot less poemy, and more "an insane person wrote this".
18Iammealso-JCWhat's with the repetition? I try not to do that in my poetry. Thankyou for the review. You are going on my favorite authors list. i like your poem. I wrote a poem like that once, only it's a lot less poemy, and more "an insane person wrote this".
7/6/2003 c1 126swift sky silver
so true... yet so confusing at the same time. melikes the title too=0)
126swift sky silverso true... yet so confusing at the same time. melikes the title too=0)
7/6/2003 c1 37Sunflower Philosophy
Very well put, simple and to the point. I love the idea... it's true, most of life is a paradox, anyway. I love the recurring verse.
Well expressed, great job.
m~* Sunflower, anyone?
37Sunflower PhilosophyVery well put, simple and to the point. I love the idea... it's true, most of life is a paradox, anyway. I love the recurring verse.
Well expressed, great job.
m~* Sunflower, anyone?