for Lost Dreams7/6/2003 c1 
10kermit
Um... how about this? Fuck you! stupid shit. Seeing as you are so clearly of a higher level of writing than me, why dont you actually post some of your stuff on the net? Oh wait, you must just use fictionpress to bag out other people's work in an effort to make you feel better about your little pathetic self.
You self righteous idiot.
I am fine with criticism, if it is constructive. Unlike yours.
10kermitUm... how about this? Fuck you! stupid shit. Seeing as you are so clearly of a higher level of writing than me, why dont you actually post some of your stuff on the net? Oh wait, you must just use fictionpress to bag out other people's work in an effort to make you feel better about your little pathetic self.
You self righteous idiot.
I am fine with criticism, if it is constructive. Unlike yours.
7/6/2003 c1 Attention Please
Ok. This poem has a lot of depth in it. I feel the pain with you brotha'.
Actually let me think about it. NOT! Man, have you ever heard of a thing called style?Or maybe...um...what was it?Oh, yeah, it has to make some sense. The title is Lost Dream and my dear you are terribly lost.
Ok. This poem has a lot of depth in it. I feel the pain with you brotha'.
Actually let me think about it. NOT! Man, have you ever heard of a thing called style?Or maybe...um...what was it?Oh, yeah, it has to make some sense. The title is Lost Dream and my dear you are terribly lost.