7/6/2003 c1 3Johnny Panic
Interesting. Joxer is a character from Juno and the Paycock isn't he? Your characterisation was excellent. I just found two miniscule errors:

"Ruddy" is a quintessential British word. "Ma and Pa" should be "Ma and Da". "Pa" is American isn't it? Anyways good work. I'll read more.