
3/26/2004 c1
137Ria Mala
Very, very, very good! It's an amazing piece! It sounds like a song to me. Very beautiful!
PS- Lostprophets! :)

Very, very, very good! It's an amazing piece! It sounds like a song to me. Very beautiful!
PS- Lostprophets! :)
7/19/2003 c1
36Psycho-kyugurl
I like it a lot too. It've just watch Atlantis: The Lost Empire just now and I think that this poem somehow connected to it. It's beatifully written. It's going into my fav. list.

I like it a lot too. It've just watch Atlantis: The Lost Empire just now and I think that this poem somehow connected to it. It's beatifully written. It's going into my fav. list.
7/11/2003 c1
8iforgot
Very nice work. It flows a lot better than mine...that's for sure. :) I'm sure i'm not the only one who thinks you write as if you're writing their thoughts and feelings. Very nice. :)

Very nice work. It flows a lot better than mine...that's for sure. :) I'm sure i'm not the only one who thinks you write as if you're writing their thoughts and feelings. Very nice. :)
7/7/2003 c1
28soulspring
the picture this paints is so vivid. it flows so well; i really like it! it's going in my favs.

the picture this paints is so vivid. it flows so well; i really like it! it's going in my favs.
7/7/2003 c1
100Keep it 100
Wow! This was perfect. I couldn't find a single thing wrong with it.
~Heart of the Sword

Wow! This was perfect. I couldn't find a single thing wrong with it.
~Heart of the Sword
7/6/2003 c1
36obsidian katana
awesome piece! wonderfully written, heartfelt and so full of emotion. i like this a lot. i know how you feel also. good job on this! keep on writing!

awesome piece! wonderfully written, heartfelt and so full of emotion. i like this a lot. i know how you feel also. good job on this! keep on writing!
7/6/2003 c1 Starlight Maiden
I LOVE THIS. Its absolutely amazing I wish I had written it myself. It leaves an atmosphere that hangs around you for a while..I really, really adore this poem. Could I express it any clearer? I doubt it. Check out Shards Of Glass by Tusaki Hibiki, thats got a lot of feeling in it, or my very own not to greatly formatted Soul Stealer...go to w.fictionpress.com/~starlightmaiden and it'll be there, its got a whole lot of metaphors I think you'll appreciate and its got a lot of pain but strength to it. No, I'm not complimenting myself, it was written from the heart. Thanks!
Starlight Maiden
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I LOVE THIS. Its absolutely amazing I wish I had written it myself. It leaves an atmosphere that hangs around you for a while..I really, really adore this poem. Could I express it any clearer? I doubt it. Check out Shards Of Glass by Tusaki Hibiki, thats got a lot of feeling in it, or my very own not to greatly formatted Soul Stealer...go to w.fictionpress.com/~starlightmaiden and it'll be there, its got a whole lot of metaphors I think you'll appreciate and its got a lot of pain but strength to it. No, I'm not complimenting myself, it was written from the heart. Thanks!
Starlight Maiden
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